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This poem, text only, is included in my latest Book/eBook ‘Clive’s Uni-Verse – A Cornishman’s take on life’.  ISBN13: 9781800743342 published by Olympia Publishers in Jan 2022.

Alive and With Medals

He stared at his war medals;
As bright as when first minted,
His own lustre long since tarnished;
Only tear-filled eyes now glinted!

He belonged to a generation
That sacrificed its fragile youth,
And traded it for our defence;
For freedom and for truth.

Although a very modest man
Who accepted his war-torn lot,
He wanted the world to remember,
All the others left to rot.

A past filled with campaigns like his,
Couldn't easily be put aside,
Though through many a tortured memory,
God only knew how he'd tried.

Don't ever forget this brave soldier,
Who now struggles to pull on his vest,
For if you forget the alive and with medals,
You'll surely, never remember the rest!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 2/1/2023 6:46:00 AM
A masterful write, Clive! I thoroughly enjoyed. I missed it when you first published it but a friend on soup shared it with me today. Bob Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Ret
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Clive Blake
Date: 2/1/2023 9:42:00 AM
Thank you very much Bob. I very much appreciate all comments, but your kind comments are particularly welcome on this poem because of your military background. I think we all owe a massive debt to both serving and retired military. ~ Clive
Date: 9/9/2021 3:20:00 PM
Very well put. I enjoyed your work.
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Clive Blake
Date: 9/10/2021 2:00:00 AM
Thank you ~ Clive :)
Date: 9/9/2021 5:16:00 AM
Too many are forgotten too soon
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Clive Blake
Date: 9/10/2021 2:02:00 AM
Hi John, I completely agree, thanks for your comment ~ Clive :)
Date: 9/8/2021 1:27:00 PM
Yes, we should always be mindful of their sacrifices and give them the care and respect they deserve. Well expressed.
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Clive Blake
Date: 9/10/2021 2:04:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, Yes, indeed, thanks for commenting ~ Clive :)
Date: 9/8/2021 7:24:00 AM
Well said, Great Poem
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Clive Blake
Date: 9/10/2021 9:40:00 AM
Thank you Dexter ~ Clive :)
Date: 9/8/2021 6:40:00 AM
So many times we forget the Vets who serves us honorably and with valor, thanks for reminding us, Clive. John
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Clive Blake
Date: 9/8/2021 11:36:00 PM
Hi John, Yes, we owe a debt to them that we will never be able to fully repay! Thanks for your comment ~ Clive :)
Date: 11/11/2020 8:06:00 PM
Glad you wrote this wonderful poem. A FAV Panagiota
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Clive Blake
Date: 11/11/2020 10:47:00 PM
Dear Panagiota, I thank you for your comment ~ Clive :)
Date: 10/31/2020 4:41:00 AM
Great poem Clive..
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Clive Blake
Date: 10/31/2020 4:59:00 AM
Thank you :)
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