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Alive

I go about my everyday life Trying so hard to concentrate But nothing is the same nothing I’m usually up and out and about Much to do world’s to conquer Music to write and songs to sing House needs attending, cat’s need food But all is just a silly pretence I’m waiting, waiting, waiting for the click The sounds that say’s an E-Mails here Click, click, click, click No! It’s just another lot of junk adverts Click , click, click, click A friend invites me out for tea Click, click, click, click A meeting to attend to and respond Click, click, click, click My theatre tickets have arrived Click, click, click, click It’s him, it’s him, it’s him The world awakens and my spirits fly Every word digested, every thought, every line My heart pounds my senses roar The words so what I want to hear I am once more ALIVE! ALIVE! ALIVE!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/5/2011 10:45:00 AM
Have a wonderful day - hug from Norway. Feel like I am seventeen again. Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/5/2011 7:05:00 AM
Daviad is right....this is a crescendo-like write! I love the raw honesty of you waiting for the ONE to contact you and all the mundane things u do in between.....I guess I can relate...I am just not that honest with myself. Hope u are gearing up for a fantastic week. ....Gotta get my Solstice Fan Club together....Love ya, Gwendolen
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Date: 12/5/2011 2:47:00 AM
Lizzie i love the way you build up to a great crescendo, many thanks for your extremely kind words..love David
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Date: 12/5/2011 1:30:00 AM
That is a very lucky guy. I wish him luck...very good write!
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