Alive

I am alive!
Resurrected, refined, defined, I am new

I am loved!
Wanted, needed, treasured, I belong

I am home!
In his mind, heart, life, his soul

I am here!
Alive, in love, at home, right now

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Mac Mcgovern

January 21, 2010 at 3:17 AM

What more do we dare ask than what has already been received. Your poem vividly reminds the significance revealed in the simplicity of being alive, loved, home, and here. Thanks for providing me the opportunity to experience your marvelous work. Mac

Vince Suzadail Jr.

January 20, 2010 at 9:36 AM

Great outlook. Great write. Vince

Joanna Smith

January 14, 2010 at 11:56 AM

again i love, you know what im just gonna make you one of my favs!

Kevin Elmore

January 14, 2010 at 6:40 AM

Loving this poem, fav for sure. Keep up the writing. Your friend, Kevin

James Fraser

January 5, 2010 at 10:35 AM

Go girl, lovely verse Audrey >> James

David Byrne

January 4, 2010 at 10:59 PM

Beautiful positive affermation!

Andrea Dietrich

January 4, 2010 at 3:13 PM

Hmmm, I somehow missed this one. LOVE IT. Short and to the point and a wonderful read.Andrea

Kim Hilliker

January 2, 2010 at 1:07 AM

Good for you. Contentment is a great thing.

Marty Owens

January 1, 2010 at 7:36 PM

This is very nice...Enjoyed...Marty

L'Nass Shango

December 29, 2009 at 1:59 PM

Fantastic ... sweet ending. Good write. I love this

Sheol Moribund

December 29, 2009 at 9:25 AM

Dear Audrey: You and your writings are ALIVE!!! Thank you so much for your creative writing skills. Have a great day and a very Happy New Year. Yours truly: Sheol

Robert A. Dufresne

December 29, 2009 at 4:37 AM

Be careful Audrey! That kind of attitude may be catchy! Thank you for reminding us to count our blessings. A very uplifting free verse,to say the least. I appreciate your comments much. -Robert

Brian Strand

December 29, 2009 at 12:46 AM

Amen Audrey.Thank you for your kind words and welcome comments.rgds Brian

Constance La France

December 28, 2009 at 6:15 PM

Beautiful poem of love... filled with happiness.. and thanks so much for your comment on my poem, Into the Future

Debbie Guzzi

December 28, 2009 at 4:39 PM

Huzzah! what a wonderful way to start the new year! Light & Love

John Freeman

December 27, 2009 at 6:06 PM

This poem pleases me greatly Audrey. To know from the content of you verse, you know that you are in the fulness of He who is life itself, Thanks for you inspiring comments, and a very Happy New Year to you also. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Mary Meade Stephenson

December 27, 2009 at 4:28 PM

Wonderfully uplifting piece you have penned here Audrey...so filled with eloquence! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes...many thanks too for your always kind comments...all is deeply appreciated! Have a glorious day~Mary

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 27, 2009 at 9:09 AM

And Audrey u are blessed.. among all these things u wrote of ... u are blessed and a gracious lady... full of talented poetry... enjoyed this free verse on this happy Sunday... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..