Alive

I am alive!
Resurrected, refined, defined, I am new

I am loved!
Wanted, needed, treasured, I belong

I am home!
In his mind, heart, life, his soul

I am here!
Alive, in love, at home, right now

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Mac Mcgovern

Date: 1/21/2010 3:17:00 AM

What more do we dare ask than what has already been received. Your poem vividly reminds the significance revealed in the simplicity of being alive, loved, home, and here. Thanks for providing me the opportunity to experience your marvelous work. Mac

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 1/20/2010 9:36:00 AM

Great outlook. Great write. Vince

Joanna Smith

Date: 1/14/2010 11:56:00 AM

again i love, you know what im just gonna make you one of my favs!

Kevin Elmore

Date: 1/14/2010 6:40:00 AM

Loving this poem, fav for sure. Keep up the writing. Your friend, Kevin

James Fraser

Date: 1/5/2010 10:35:00 AM

Go girl, lovely verse Audrey >> James

David Byrne

Date: 1/4/2010 10:59:00 PM

Beautiful positive affermation!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2010 3:13:00 PM

Hmmm, I somehow missed this one. LOVE IT. Short and to the point and a wonderful read.Andrea

Kim Hilliker

Date: 1/2/2010 1:07:00 AM

Good for you. Contentment is a great thing.

Marty Owens

Date: 1/1/2010 7:36:00 PM

This is very nice...Enjoyed...Marty

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/29/2009 1:59:00 PM

Fantastic ... sweet ending. Good write. I love this

Sheol Moribund

Date: 12/29/2009 9:25:00 AM

Dear Audrey: You and your writings are ALIVE!!! Thank you so much for your creative writing skills. Have a great day and a very Happy New Year. Yours truly: Sheol

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/29/2009 4:37:00 AM

Be careful Audrey! That kind of attitude may be catchy! Thank you for reminding us to count our blessings. A very uplifting free verse,to say the least. I appreciate your comments much. -Robert

Brian Strand

Date: 12/29/2009 12:46:00 AM

Amen Audrey.Thank you for your kind words and welcome comments.rgds Brian

Constance La France

Date: 12/28/2009 6:15:00 PM

Beautiful poem of love... filled with happiness.. and thanks so much for your comment on my poem, Into the Future

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/28/2009 4:39:00 PM

Huzzah! what a wonderful way to start the new year! Light & Love

John Freeman

Date: 12/27/2009 6:06:00 PM

This poem pleases me greatly Audrey. To know from the content of you verse, you know that you are in the fulness of He who is life itself, Thanks for you inspiring comments, and a very Happy New Year to you also. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/27/2009 4:28:00 PM

Wonderfully uplifting piece you have penned here Audrey...so filled with eloquence! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes...many thanks too for your always kind comments...all is deeply appreciated! Have a glorious day~Mary

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/27/2009 9:09:00 AM

And Audrey u are blessed.. among all these things u wrote of ... u are blessed and a gracious lady... full of talented poetry... enjoyed this free verse on this happy Sunday... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..

Robin Maughan

Date: 12/27/2009 8:31:00 AM

So uplifting! Thanks for this poem! Great write! Hugs, Robin

James Fraser

Date: 12/27/2009 3:04:00 AM

Lovely piece Audrey >> Merry Christmas to you >> James