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Alien Abduction

Weightless, within a sea of black, ebony hugs your every curve. And yet, you sense you're not alone, for someone calls compellingly. A portal appears in the pitch, as shafts of light dispel the dark. And like a Goddess, you glow in an aura of shimmering light. Color, dripping drops of crimson, leaves a copper taste on your tongue. And secluded in the shadows, fear flickers in and out of view. Fingers caress body and soul, not as a man might stroke a pet. But like an intimate lover, arousing passion with his touch. Hidden behind a shield of dreams, every night, you are returned home. And you awaken, unaware that alien abductions are real. (Blank Verse) 5/5/2013
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Mishra Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 10:42 AM
the phenomena of dreaming i related this poetry.... and i loved the way its been presented, the writing and words chosen....
Pinet Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Thanks so much Ashok, your comments and support are greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 3:16 PM
O Emile, what a seductively beautiful poem. Love the alliterations and sensuous passages throughout. One of my favourites is "Like a Goddess you glow in an aura of shimmering light." You leave the reader weak at the knees, uninteresting in debating your last line because the poem is so delectable. Bravo. Another FAVE for me.
Pinet Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 5:49 PM
Thanks Line, all of your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Nau Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 12:56 PM
Love it! This was fun and just glided right along. Beautiful word choice, love the metaphor. Congrdulations on this one Emile.
Pinet Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 1:05 PM
Thanks Edlynn, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.
Tor Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 4:12 PM
Love this Emile. Part of my research was on this topic. Silent Invasion by Ellen Crystal started my research. Incredible reading. I recommend reading. I will write about my experiences. Emile you have cleverly shown reality here my friend a 7 and a deserved win!
Pinet Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 4:19 PM
Thanks so much Michael, I appreciate the time you took to comment on this poem. Emile.
A  Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 12:42 PM
Emile, Congrats on your any poem win. SKAT <3
Pinet Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 1:46 PM
Thanks again SKAT, I appreciate it. Emile.
A. Sharma Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 12:44 AM
Yet another lovely win Emile.. big congrats!
Pinet Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 8:29 AM
Thank you Upma, I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.
A   Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 11:45 PM
Emile, Congrats on the win. Enjoy my newest blog "One More Thing" if you'd like. Always ~LINDA~
Pinet Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 8:30 AM
Thanks LINDA, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.
Jones Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 2:04 PM
Emile, what an interesting write. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. A 7 from me. *S* Cynthia
Miers Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 12:31 PM
a strangely piquant rhythm of a one night stand. at least, that's what pops up in my head. hmmm. really kind of jazz-like beat. cool.
Pinet Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 1:49 PM
Thanks again for your support. Emile.
Eastman Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 12:02 PM
An interesting write. Welcome to PoetrySoup with this win.
Udaeta Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 12:24 PM
Awesome! :D I enjoyed this. :D
Oyewole Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 11:23 AM
Congrats on your superb win.
Lanre Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 12:10 PM
Congrats. Great lines.
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 8:40 AM
Intriguing poem, a well deserved win. Congratulations! Warm Smiles, Connie
Gorelick Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 6:26 AM
well done and congrats to you. BG
A   Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 9:24 PM
thank you Emile, for taking your time in entering my contest. it was an honor in having your poem a #1 choice by me. Congratulations!!! LINDA
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