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Weightless, within a sea of black, ebony hugs your every curve. And yet, you sense you're not alone, for someone calls compellingly. A portal appears in the pitch, as shafts of light dispel the dark. And like a Goddess, you glow in an aura of shimmering light. Color, dripping drops of crimson, leaves a copper taste on your tongue. And secluded in the shadows, fear flickers in and out of view. Fingers caress body and soul, not as a man might stroke a pet. But like an intimate lover, arousing passion with his touch. Hidden behind a shield of dreams, every night, you are returned home. And you awaken, unaware that alien abductions are real. (Blank Verse) 5/5/2013

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Date: 4/23/2018 10:42:00 AM
the phenomena of dreaming i related this poetry.... and i loved the way its been presented, the writing and words chosen....
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/24/2018 8:47:00 AM
Thanks so much Ashok, your comments and support are greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/25/2018 3:16:00 PM
O Emile, what a seductively beautiful poem. Love the alliterations and sensuous passages throughout. One of my favourites is "Like a Goddess you glow in an aura of shimmering light." You leave the reader weak at the knees, uninteresting in debating your last line because the poem is so delectable. Bravo. Another FAVE for me.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/25/2018 5:49:00 PM
Thanks Line, all of your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/11/2015 12:56:00 PM
Love it! This was fun and just glided right along. Beautiful word choice, love the metaphor. Congrdulations on this one Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/11/2015 1:05:00 PM
Thanks Edlynn, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 11/3/2015 4:12:00 PM
Love this Emile. Part of my research was on this topic. Silent Invasion by Ellen Crystal started my research. Incredible reading. I recommend reading. I will write about my experiences. Emile you have cleverly shown reality here my friend a 7 and a deserved win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/3/2015 4:19:00 PM
Thanks so much Michael, I appreciate the time you took to comment on this poem. Emile.
Date: 11/3/2015 12:42:00 PM
Emile, Congrats on your any poem win. SKAT <3
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/3/2015 1:46:00 PM
Thanks again SKAT, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 11/3/2015 12:44:00 AM
Yet another lovely win Emile.. big congrats!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/3/2015 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Upma, I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.
Date: 11/2/2015 11:45:00 PM
Emile, Congrats on the win. Enjoy my newest blog "One More Thing" if you'd like. Always ~LINDA~
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/3/2015 8:30:00 AM
Thanks LINDA, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 4/6/2015 2:04:00 PM
Emile, what an interesting write. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. A 7 from me. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 2/8/2015 12:31:00 PM
a strangely piquant rhythm of a one night stand. at least, that's what pops up in my head. hmmm. really kind of jazz-like beat. cool.
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Date: 2/8/2015 1:49:00 PM
Thanks again for your support. Emile.
Date: 5/22/2013 12:02:00 PM
An interesting write. Welcome to PoetrySoup with this win.
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Date: 5/9/2013 12:24:00 PM
Awesome! :D I enjoyed this. :D
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Date: 5/9/2013 11:23:00 AM
Congrats on your superb win.
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Date: 5/8/2013 12:10:00 PM
Congrats. Great lines.
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Date: 5/8/2013 8:40:00 AM
Intriguing poem, a well deserved win. Congratulations! Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/8/2013 6:26:00 AM
well done and congrats to you. BG
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Date: 5/7/2013 9:24:00 PM
thank you Emile, for taking your time in entering my contest. it was an honor in having your poem a #1 choice by me. Congratulations!!! LINDA
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