Alice Through the Looking Glass

Now that the wicked witch has left the room….

Alice…in Never, Never Land, with clouded brow, and foggy mind, stares through the looking glass at the flames of autumn falling from the maples trees.

And…as she watches this ballet of little fluttering fairies in flaming gowns of crimson, amber and gold, she REMEMBERS…yes…she REMEMBERS… that world where she once lived.

She remembers a time so long ago… when with unclouded brow… she danced with those flaming fairies and laid down with them when they fell to the ground in the backyard of the house where she once lived with her mother, father, brothers and sisters. 

Where are they now, she wonders?

And in that moment….she sees their smiling faces and hears their laughter as the aroma of that magical autumn so long ago, returns obliterating the smell of antiseptic and death.

A smile slowly creeps across her weathered face as she realizes, SHE HAS ESCAPED.

BUT THEN…the door opens………………AND THE SPELL IS BROKEN, for the wicked witch has returned.  

TIME FOR YOUR MEDICATION, ALICE…she sweetly croons, as she pulls down the blind.


Author:  Elaine George
Written:  September 4th, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/17/2015 8:16:00 PM
I totally intend to hide in Alice should this time ever come for me! so scary Elaine! Light & Love
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Date: 4/8/2015 10:14:00 AM
HI, old friend. Thanks for reading my stuff. How is your book coming? Think of you often. Love, daver
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Date: 3/21/2015 7:24:00 PM
Absolutely a Beautiful Piece, Elaine. The descriptive metaphors in this poem are amazing. The way you describe the mindset of the elderly is wonderful. Enjoyable piece overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 9/8/2014 5:43:00 PM
yes, I could tell it was an elderly person. I am glad you are a person who writes CLEARLY and not like these new fangled free verse poets who write in mysterious language that most people can't even understand!! I really love this.
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Elaine George
Date: 9/11/2014 9:45:00 AM
I know what you mean about those free verses. A great majority of them leave my mind in a knot. lol! bfn Lainie
Date: 9/8/2014 5:09:00 PM
really love how you drew this excellent pen
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Date: 9/11/2014 9:39:00 AM
Thank you for dropping in, Liam. Lainie
Date: 9/8/2014 3:19:00 PM
Well done, Lainie! The older we get the more we tend to reflect on the autumn of our life. I really enjoyed your take on this subject which you tackled with wisdom and wit mixed together. a top 7 rating for you! // paul
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Date: 9/11/2014 9:32:00 AM
Thank you for dropping in, and thank you for your kind comments, Paul. Lainie
Date: 9/8/2014 11:27:00 AM
The autumn of life humorously treated. Love it. This is right where I'm at. Love, daver
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Date: 9/11/2014 9:26:00 AM
Glad you liked it, Dave. bfn Lainie
Date: 9/8/2014 2:04:00 AM
This is really a fantastic write, Lainie. I was fascinated by the metaphors and enchanting imagery. I think that I will be adding this poem to my favorites!
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Date: 9/8/2014 2:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Kelly, Glad you liked it. bfn Lainie
Date: 9/7/2014 3:45:00 PM
truly a wonderful poem,,love the message,,and just love reading you again Elaine, been a long time,,but this was sure worth the wait....
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Date: 9/8/2014 2:54:00 AM
Thank you, Harry. Yes! It is good to be back. So nice to hear from you. Thanks for your kind comments. bfn Lainie
Date: 9/5/2014 9:18:00 PM
wow, Elaine, this is very intelligent writing. I just love the symbolism it exudes. Great writing from one of Soup's greatest!
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Date: 9/5/2014 10:13:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. It was a take on being old and in a nursing home. This is the way I think it is for some of those poor, old souls. Thanks for dropping by. Lainie
Date: 9/5/2014 12:57:00 PM
Cool story, Elaine. Really enjoyed the surprise ending! Sending you a Soup mail that I hope you'll read. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/5/2014 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn, I didn't catch it. Much appreciated. It has been corrected. bfn Lainie
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