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Alice Bent Over

A gathering of elders from the local rest home is out for a walk after dusk on canes and walkers admiring roses and lilies and a pond of rainbow koi except for Alice trailing without cane or walker whose head is bent over at the neck so she sees nothing but ants scurrying around her. Alice is the letter “L” upside down forever. She will never see the sun light up the sky or the stars glow in the night or the halo of moonlight falling around her. Donal Mahoney

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Date: 3/22/2017 2:05:00 PM
Beautiful and sad.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/22/2017 3:28:00 PM
I have seen it. A gentleman in my neighbourhood; I always make a point of meeting his smile when I see him out and about.
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Donal Mahoney
Date: 3/22/2017 2:11:00 PM
Maureen, It's a condition called Dropped Head Syndrome among other names. Until one sees it one cannot imagine the effect on the observer never mind the afflicted. I saw two people with it in one day. Enough for a lifetime.

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