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Alice and Andy

An alligator, aggravated, ate another aardvark. Although abdomen’s aching, and another aardvark’s abating, Alice’s argument’s arbitrating. Albeit alert at Alligator’s advance, Andy’s ascertaining alligator’s ailment. Andy awaits assurance. Alice’s arrested and anchored. Alas, abbreviated adieu!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 4/27/2025 1:38:00 PM
Impressive, Kim:-) You're the ONLY one that I see writing this very challenging form properly...lol.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2025 6:09:00 PM
Thank you so kindly, my friend!
Date: 9/27/2024 3:45:00 PM
Gosh, this looks difficult. A cute tale....<3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2024 6:00:00 PM
A little bit!
Date: 9/22/2024 9:21:00 PM
Amazing word play! Dear Kim, love your juggle with 'A' lettered words. This is a new poetic form, I come to know of for the first time. Thanks for sharing.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2024 1:10:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed! Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 9/22/2024 7:37:00 PM
Heh, heh. Now I know who Amos' wife was (i.e, It was Alice). ~ Andy, Sapphire, and the rest of the cast of 'Amos and Andy'
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2024 7:48:00 PM
And I thought Alice was married to Ralph…to the moon and back ;)
Date: 9/22/2024 1:35:00 PM
Love it, with giggles. Alive and apropos as all As allow. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2024 5:01:00 PM
LOL…thank you, Linda!
Date: 9/22/2024 4:47:00 AM
delicious poetry, with funny alliterations, i think it is very creative and difficult to write, thanks poet
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2024 5:41:00 AM
I appreciate your encouragement!
Date: 9/21/2024 1:58:00 PM
Dear Kim, okay this filled my afternoon emotions reading such a wonderful word play with the letter A. Quite imaginative and entertaining. A pleasure reading! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2024 2:02:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel! Thought I’d give it a try!
Date: 9/21/2024 1:17:00 PM
This is freakishly creative, i'm genuinely shocked and fairly puzzled as to how you've whirled this up
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2024 2:05:00 PM
LOL! I appreciate it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2024 2:02:00 PM
LOL! I appreciate it!
Date: 9/21/2024 8:49:00 AM
Your "Alice and Andy" is a creative write. Have a blessed/fun weekend................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2024 9:07:00 AM
Thanks! Have a blessed and fun weekend, Paula!

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