Alice

ALICE (an unfortunate decision) Alice had the urge to go Hated to leave the picture show But what the lass had et for dinner Was growling boiling deep within her Decided she to tend it later Emptied out the whole theater

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/7/2011 7:22:00 PM

What a hoot, I enjoyed this so much - a great one.

Judy Ball

Date: 7/7/2011 1:37:00 PM

Wooaahhh!!!! Git the Pepto Bismol, Y'all!! This one made me laugh my friend. When I was dating my husband we were at a drive in movie and he was eating pop corn and had a cup of coffee. It didn't mix well and he opened the door and left it all on the ground. then he moved the car. God Bless, JB

Elaine George

Date: 6/24/2011 9:22:00 AM

Thanks for my laugh of the day, Dave. You always do it to me. Love, Lainie. I will send you a few chapters of my memoir in the near future. Re-writing chapter three. I am my own worst critic.

James Foulk

Date: 6/23/2011 1:43:00 PM

thank you for commenting on When You're Young.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/23/2011 10:51:00 AM

DAVER! lolol... my imagination is running wild and wacky... such a swell, goofy offering... love this, ewhhh! :) huggs, nette

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/23/2011 9:30:00 AM

Hahahaha! and I thought this was about THE Alice ;) I got wind of something else though- heehee-- this is such a funny write, got me laughing aloud, Dave -- enjoyed this one :D hugs :)

James Peranteau

Date: 6/22/2011 7:55:00 PM

So blessed I take the moment for you To find the meaning inside thy write and smile I do ! have a blessed week dear poet....much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2011 10:34:00 PM

and I see this was not for Alice in wonderland contest. heeheee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2011 10:33:00 PM

hahahhaha. really funny, Daver. Luv ya!

John Rhinem

Date: 6/21/2011 3:09:00 PM

Smile ~ “Hahaha, Been There Done That *^_#* My Sweeet Daver ~ How's My Man??? ~ I'll Take A Laugh Over Melancholies Moment In Chains Any Day ~ And Precious Alice Probably Enjoyed The Rest of The Play After Her Liberation ~ Hahaha ~ `Love, Always,`” John!:) ~

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/21/2011 2:35:00 PM

Yip! Poor Alice, from Wonder Land, Daver? The theater would wonder who or what? She would wonder why they'd all left.:) This is a hoot!! Loved it the first time I'd read this; as funny the second time 'round! Never know what's going to slip out of your sleeve.:) Daver, all are welcome to audition. Bet there are some sourpuss judges, though. Best to you and yours! Love, Mickey

Mike Harms

Date: 6/21/2011 2:00:00 PM

demented I love it

James Foulk

Date: 6/21/2011 1:36:00 PM

a nice limerick, made my day, a real funny one enjloyed it. thank you for commenting on Summers gone by.