Alice

It had been months since I’d seen Alice
and I felt compelled to see her again.
She was a woman who liked surprises,
so on the spur of the moment
I got in my car and drove,
heading west, chasing down the sun.

But the sun won out
and before I knew it
he was smiling 
in my rear view mirror.

Tulsa was just coming to life
as I pulled up in front of her house.
I walked down the cobblestone path
past the well manicured lawn.
The roses were in bloom on the trellis.
When I reached the massive door
I banged vigorously on the brass knocker.
A well dressed man opened up
and asked me my business.
"I'd like to see Alice, please," I said.
"Sorry sir, Alice doesn't live here anymore."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Willason Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 3:14 PM
Life has a knack of non compliance to our plans. Enjoyed the ride ....pity it didn’t end the way you imagined, or perhaps it did. Regards, Paul
Summers Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 1:49 PM
Thanks Paul for sharing your observations. Kind of you to stop in. John
Buehler Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 7:40 PM
Too bad the long drive had to end in disappointment. A nicely written, interesting story, John. :)
Summers Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 4:19 PM
Thanks so much Evelyn. I appreciate you stopping by. John
Wolf Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 7:48 PM
Ooh. Ka-chunk... so many lessons to learn here, John. Thanks, gw
Summers Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Thank goodness I still enjoy driving. Have a good one. John
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