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Alice

It had been months since I’d seen Alice and I felt compelled to see her again. She was a woman who liked surprises, so on the spur of the moment I got in my car and drove, heading west, chasing down the sun. But the sun won out and before I knew it he was smiling in my rear view mirror. Tulsa was just coming to life as I pulled up in front of her house. I walked down the cobblestone path past the well manicured lawn. The roses were in bloom on the trellis. When I reached the massive door I banged vigorously on the brass knocker. A well dressed man opened up and asked me my business. "I'd like to see Alice, please," I said. "Sorry sir, Alice doesn't live here anymore."

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Date: 2/23/2023 3:14:00 PM
Life has a knack of non compliance to our plans. Enjoyed the ride ....pity it didn’t end the way you imagined, or perhaps it did. Regards, Paul
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J. Summers
Date: 2/24/2023 1:49:00 PM
Thanks Paul for sharing your observations. Kind of you to stop in. John
Date: 2/13/2023 7:40:00 PM
Too bad the long drive had to end in disappointment. A nicely written, interesting story, John. :)
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J. Summers
Date: 2/14/2023 4:19:00 PM
Thanks so much Evelyn. I appreciate you stopping by. John
Date: 2/11/2023 7:48:00 PM
Ooh. Ka-chunk... so many lessons to learn here, John. Thanks, gw
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J. Summers
Date: 2/12/2023 6:38:00 AM
Thank goodness I still enjoy driving. Have a good one. John

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