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Alfonso On a Red Horse

Alfonso on a red horse
   a huge rocking of the stars
where twinkling lasso stirs up
the sparkling dance floor

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Silent One

Date: 10/24/2023 12:52:00 PM

Lovely poem Kim.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2023 5:59:00 PM

Thank you so much! I appreciate you, Silent!

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/24/2023 7:11:00 AM

Kim, your poem is just lovely and unique, congratulations on your win

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2023 7:19:00 AM

Thank you so much <3

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/24/2023 6:22:00 AM

Dear Kim, Love this beautiful and unique poem! Your images and word choices are just stunning!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2023 7:20:00 AM

Thank you xx

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/24/2023 5:04:00 AM

Wow, this is a very creative dodoitsu with your intriguing wordplay and intriguing imagery, oh my, "rocking of the stars" Absolutely love that!! "Twinkling lasso" Such amazing descriptions here.. Heartiest congratulations on the win! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2023 5:44:00 AM

Thank you so much, Hiya! Hugs!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/24/2023 2:35:00 AM

Dear Kim, I absolutely love this dodoitsu, not just for the liveliness of your imagery but the way it flows and how unique and creative it is! I especially loved the line “ rocking of the stars” so profound and artistic! I can see the sparkling dance floor so cosmically divine and ethereal! A very well woven dodoitsu with perfect syllables too! Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS on winning in my contest. Well deserved

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2023 5:43:00 AM

Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed! Thank for bringing dodoitsu to the forefront! Loved writing!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2023 2:32:00 PM

Creative work. I am not sure where it is coming from or where it is going but it was enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing your uniqueness with us and for the visits to my pages. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2023 5:32:00 PM

The inspiration was the show Dancing with the Stars. One of the hosts, Alfonso was literally on a big rocking horse. :)