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Alfonso On a Red Horse

Alfonso on a red horse a huge rocking of the stars where twinkling lasso stirs up the sparkling dance floor

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Silent One

Date: 10/24/2023 12:52:00 PM

Lovely poem Kim.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2023 5:59:00 PM

Thank you so much! I appreciate you, Silent!

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/24/2023 7:11:00 AM

Kim, your poem is just lovely and unique, congratulations on your win

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2023 7:19:00 AM

Thank you so much <3

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/24/2023 6:22:00 AM

Dear Kim, Love this beautiful and unique poem! Your images and word choices are just stunning!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2023 7:20:00 AM

Thank you xx

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/24/2023 5:04:00 AM

Wow, this is a very creative dodoitsu with your intriguing wordplay and intriguing imagery, oh my, "rocking of the stars" Absolutely love that!! "Twinkling lasso" Such amazing descriptions here.. Heartiest congratulations on the win! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2023 5:44:00 AM

Thank you so much, Hiya! Hugs!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/24/2023 2:35:00 AM

Dear Kim, I absolutely love this dodoitsu, not just for the liveliness of your imagery but the way it flows and how unique and creative it is! I especially loved the line “ rocking of the stars” so profound and artistic! I can see the sparkling dance floor so cosmically divine and ethereal! A very well woven dodoitsu with perfect syllables too! Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS on winning in my contest. Well deserved

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2023 5:43:00 AM

Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed! Thank for bringing dodoitsu to the forefront! Loved writing!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2023 2:32:00 PM

Creative work. I am not sure where it is coming from or where it is going but it was enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing your uniqueness with us and for the visits to my pages. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2023 5:32:00 PM

The inspiration was the show Dancing with the Stars. One of the hosts, Alfonso was literally on a big rocking horse. :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/20/2023 11:17:00 AM

A space cowboy, let's ride to the stars and back~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2023 11:27:00 AM

Love you!! I always love when someone adds to the fun! Feeling exuberant with your response!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2023 12:37:00 PM

this is SO cool. Love it, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2023 11:28:00 AM

Thank you SO much, Andrea! <3

Valsa George

Date: 10/19/2023 6:26:00 AM

A very vibrant scene you have pictured in your dodoitsu in keeping with the contest's requirements ! All the best, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2023 11:28:00 AM

Thank you, dear one!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/19/2023 5:10:00 AM

Vibrant and enlivening! This one will be difficult to beat

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2023 5:21:00 AM

Thank you so much! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/18/2023 8:51:00 PM

This reads so gaily (in the old sense of the word). The joy just spills out of the lines. Three thumbs up (out of two). ~ !50%

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2023 3:26:00 AM

Thanks so much, Gershon!

The Situation

Date: 10/18/2023 7:00:00 PM

Thinking of Saturday nite fever with John Trovolta.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2023 7:09:00 PM

That was a great movie!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/18/2023 3:13:00 PM

your Dodo Itsu just sparkled with joy! Reading it reminded me of the times when my stepson would ride his rocking horse with his invisible lasso. You've inspired me to try writing a Dodo Itsu...have a pleasant evening. Think I'll fave this...Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2023 6:46:00 PM

So glad you will write a dodoitsu! I will check it out. Thank you, Sara!