Alfonso On a Red Horse

Alfonso on a red horse
   a huge rocking of the stars
where twinkling lasso stirs up
the sparkling dance floor
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October 24, 2023 at 12:52 PM
Lovely poem Kim.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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October 24, 2023 at 5:59 PM
Thank you so much! I appreciate you, Silent!
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October 24, 2023 at 7:11 AM
Kim, your poem is just lovely and unique, congratulations on your win
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October 24, 2023 at 7:19 AM
Thank you so much <3
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October 24, 2023 at 6:22 AM
Dear Kim, Love this beautiful and unique poem! Your images and word choices are just stunning!
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October 24, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Thank you xx
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October 24, 2023 at 5:04 AM
Wow, this is a very creative dodoitsu with your intriguing wordplay and intriguing imagery, oh my, "rocking of the stars" Absolutely love that!! "Twinkling lasso" Such amazing descriptions here.. Heartiest congratulations on the win! :)
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October 24, 2023 at 5:44 AM
Thank you so much, Hiya! Hugs!
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October 24, 2023 at 2:35 AM
Dear Kim, I absolutely love this dodoitsu, not just for the liveliness of your imagery but the way it flows and how unique and creative it is! I especially loved the line “ rocking of the stars” so profound and artistic! I can see the sparkling dance floor so cosmically divine and ethereal! A very well woven dodoitsu with perfect syllables too! Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS on winning in my contest. Well deserved
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October 24, 2023 at 5:43 AM
Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed! Thank for bringing dodoitsu to the forefront! Loved writing!
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October 21, 2023 at 2:32 PM
Creative work. I am not sure where it is coming from or where it is going but it was enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing your uniqueness with us and for the visits to my pages. Sara K
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October 21, 2023 at 5:32 PM
The inspiration was the show Dancing with the Stars. One of the hosts, Alfonso was literally on a big rocking horse. :)
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October 20, 2023 at 11:17 AM
A space cowboy, let's ride to the stars and back~
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October 20, 2023 at 11:27 AM
Love you!! I always love when someone adds to the fun! Feeling exuberant with your response!
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October 19, 2023 at 12:37 PM
this is SO cool. Love it, Kim
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October 20, 2023 at 11:28 AM
Thank you SO much, Andrea! <3
George Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 6:26 AM
A very vibrant scene you have pictured in your dodoitsu in keeping with the contest's requirements ! All the best, Kim.
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October 20, 2023 at 11:28 AM
Thank you, dear one!
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October 19, 2023 at 5:10 AM
Vibrant and enlivening! This one will be difficult to beat
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October 19, 2023 at 5:21 AM
Thank you so much! :)
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October 18, 2023 at 8:51 PM
This reads so gaily (in the old sense of the word). The joy just spills out of the lines. Three thumbs up (out of two). ~ !50%
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October 19, 2023 at 3:26 AM
Thanks so much, Gershon!
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October 18, 2023 at 7:00 PM
Thinking of Saturday nite fever with John Trovolta.
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October 18, 2023 at 7:09 PM
That was a great movie!
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October 18, 2023 at 3:05 PM
Sweet! Reminds me of the old disco floor, I love this!
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October 18, 2023 at 6:46 PM
The disco floor. I remember it well…even what I was wearing. :)
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October 18, 2023 at 10:21 AM
I liked this, especially the 'rocking stars'. Nicely done, Kim!
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October 18, 2023 at 11:15 AM
Thanks, Paige!
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October 18, 2023 at 8:56 AM
Your imagery is fabulous. Well done. Hugs and blessings.
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October 18, 2023 at 11:16 AM
Thank you, Victor! Hugs and blessings! xx
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