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Alfie

Down the foggy street your lonely figure did laik,* no words no smile just waiting for your mate, knowing I, a wandering soul. Like the wind! I’d come and go, summer madness winter’s snow, recharged urchin forever all aglow. Yet! next to the corner shop your place, we all perceived your fortress, a sanctuary to hide you from the real world. Oh yes! you were the bullies delight they smacked you around, you were too afraid to fight. To see your eyes shout out in sheer terror, I had to intervene your mother never forgot! In childhood, you bore witness to all that was evil, fear begot the prisoner locked within yourself. Sometimes! I try to tell myself the fights were never real, just a fantasy of this time we invaded, a time when might was conceived as right and weakness an excuse for intimidation! Here now! I stand at your feet barely forty, and you’ve gone no doubt to a better place, your mother by my side conveys a reflection of yesteryear, Chapel Street, Back Beck our visits to the monastery for the fruit of the bee. The tears still flow she misses you so! “Yet it is so apparent here you lay in sublime rosiness, St Peter, smiles upon this place, whilst death ended life’s neurotic war.” * laik. yorkshire dialect for play © Harry J Horsman 2001

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/21/2012 4:45:00 PM
Harry, this poignant beautiful poem belongs at the top. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 9/20/2012 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Harry. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2012 9:27:00 PM
Harry, I remember this one from when I saw it the first time. I'm so happy she put it high in her winners list. This one of yours is simply outstanding. The theme and craftsmanship, WOW. (congrats)
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Date: 9/17/2012 6:26:00 PM
A tale too often told I am sure and so well done! Thank you for showing us your heart. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/3/2012 12:58:00 AM
A heartbreaking piece of a man who suffered at the helm of ignorance and fearful souls... At least someone stood by alfie and his mum throughout the years... bless you for your loyalty and bravery... karen
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Date: 5/28/2012 4:20:00 PM
*tear* I understand....love ya, deb 'arry, if you haven't read my Peter the pan adventure, you might want to considerate it ;-) that's all I'm saying
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Date: 5/24/2012 2:01:00 PM
Loss and memories, leaves me feeling thankful for all I have..lovely Harry. Tanya
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Date: 5/24/2012 7:42:00 AM
The write all came together so very well as I came to its end dear poet. What a fantastic write ! Have a blessed week Harry....much love, james
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Date: 5/21/2012 9:41:00 PM
wow, Harry, stunning poem. It makes me want to know more about him and his life. Is it all true? And were you the one who had seen Being Human? I was waiting for an answer about that show but maybe it was someone else from England who had seen the final episode! Glad to be back reading your poems, my friend and thanks for your comments to me this weekend.
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Date: 5/21/2012 4:29:00 PM
we all have these memories.
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Date: 5/21/2012 1:29:00 AM
stinging write that sends the message across bold and clear... bullies thrive in fear, harry... grreat stuff!..:) huggs!
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Date: 5/20/2012 11:00:00 AM
wonderful but sad write, Harry. Congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 5/20/2012 9:35:00 AM
Being bullied is such a lonely thing to get through and it always leaves scars. You give an amazing rendition of the pain that goes with it Harry.
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Date: 5/20/2012 5:11:00 AM
Your talent, and ability to write in any style you choose is amazing. 7 for this wonderful treat.
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Date: 5/20/2012 1:32:00 AM
Harry, awe! some images are at peace...enjoyed.. thank you for sharing and expressing your poem with us. Take care~ Linda
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Date: 5/19/2012 3:47:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..I like the last line "whilst death ended life's neurotic war"..Sad that for some that is what life is a neurotic war...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 5/19/2012 9:00:00 AM
Simply, a material body passes along with Soul is life. In between and among many things.......life ends its neurotic war. Hi friend, you have shown a better level where we are still there. Thanks for reading my write by giving time to me,loved always...............,bl
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Date: 5/19/2012 8:57:00 AM
A beautiful, yet sad piece Harry.. So many memories in this write of yours.. I enjoyed the imagery as well.. Love Wilma
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