Alfie

Down the foggy street
your lonely figure did laik,*
no words no smile
just waiting for your mate,
knowing I,  a wandering soul.
Like the wind!
I’d come and go, summer madness
winter’s snow, recharged urchin
forever all aglow.  Yet!
next to the corner shop
your place, we all perceived
your fortress, a sanctuary to hide
you from the real world.
Oh yes!
you were the bullies delight
they smacked you around,
you were too afraid to fight.
To see your eyes
shout out in sheer terror,
I had to intervene
your mother never forgot!
In childhood,
you bore witness to all that was
evil, fear begot the prisoner
locked within yourself.
Sometimes!  I try to tell myself
the fights were never real,
just a fantasy of this time
we invaded, a time when
might was conceived as right
and weakness an excuse
for intimidation!
Here now!
I stand at your feet
barely forty, and you’ve gone
no doubt to a better place,
your mother by my side
conveys a reflection of
yesteryear, Chapel Street, Back Beck
our visits to the monastery
for the fruit of the bee.
The tears still flow
she misses you so!
“Yet it is so apparent
here you lay in sublime rosiness,
St Peter, smiles upon this place,
whilst death ended life’s neurotic war.”

* laik.  yorkshire dialect for play

© Harry J Horsman  2001
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 4:45 PM
Harry, this poignant beautiful poem belongs at the top. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
Brown Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Harry. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 9:27 PM
Harry, I remember this one from when I saw it the first time. I'm so happy she put it high in her winners list. This one of yours is simply outstanding. The theme and craftsmanship, WOW. (congrats)
Guzzi Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 6:26 PM
A tale too often told I am sure and so well done! Thank you for showing us your heart. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Deeks Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 12:58 AM
A heartbreaking piece of a man who suffered at the helm of ignorance and fearful souls... At least someone stood by alfie and his mum throughout the years... bless you for your loyalty and bravery... karen
Burch Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 4:20 PM
*tear* I understand....love ya, deb 'arry, if you haven't read my Peter the pan adventure, you might want to considerate it ;-) that's all I'm saying
Harrington Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 2:01 PM
Loss and memories, leaves me feeling thankful for all I have..lovely Harry. Tanya
Peranteau Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 7:42 AM
The write all came together so very well as I came to its end dear poet. What a fantastic write ! Have a blessed week Harry....much love, james
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 9:41 PM
wow, Harry, stunning poem. It makes me want to know more about him and his life. Is it all true? And were you the one who had seen Being Human? I was waiting for an answer about that show but maybe it was someone else from England who had seen the final episode! Glad to be back reading your poems, my friend and thanks for your comments to me this weekend.
Loving Iii Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 4:29 PM
we all have these memories.
Onclaud Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 1:29 AM
stinging write that sends the message across bold and clear... bullies thrive in fear, harry... grreat stuff!..:) huggs!
Horne Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 11:00 AM
wonderful but sad write, Harry. Congrats on all your wins : )
Wesley Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 9:35 AM
Being bullied is such a lonely thing to get through and it always leaves scars. You give an amazing rendition of the pain that goes with it Harry.
Nutter Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 5:11 AM
Your talent, and ability to write in any style you choose is amazing. 7 for this wonderful treat.
A   Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 1:32 AM
Harry, awe! some images are at peace...enjoyed.. thank you for sharing and expressing your poem with us. Take care~ Linda
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 3:47 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..I like the last line "whilst death ended life's neurotic war"..Sad that for some that is what life is a neurotic war...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Devnath  Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 9:00 AM
Simply, a material body passes along with Soul is life. In between and among many things.......life ends its neurotic war. Hi friend, you have shown a better level where we are still there. Thanks for reading my write by giving time to me,loved always...............,bl
Neels Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 8:57 AM
A beautiful, yet sad piece Harry.. So many memories in this write of yours.. I enjoyed the imagery as well.. Love Wilma
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