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- Alcoholic Delirium -

hallucinations

                          - wise enough to understand

                                 ... castles in the air

                         - world seems different and changed

                                    ... lonely and empty bottle










22/07/2020
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Panagiota Romios

August 10, 2020 at 6:01 AM

These poems bring out the sadness of alcoholism. Then all the righteous come out~ holier than thorough-ERs are worse than alcoholics. Alcoholics can and do get sober. Try Betty Ford. She overcame an addiction and opened clinics. I think that Old movie Wine and Roses should be required viewing. Alcoholics are human beings with an addiction. They may die from it. Anyway, sorry to talk so much. Well written... Thanks Pangiexx

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 10, 2020 at 10:11 AM

- It's a serious issue, Panagiota - Thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

August 6, 2020 at 11:00 AM

hI anne-Lise, another powerful write from your golden pen. Your words rncapsulte your thought excellently. I am so glad I gave up any kind of alcoholic beverage in my late twenties. The strongest drink I have is tea. Too many people have a dependency on drink. Have a wonderful Thursday. Love and Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 6, 2020 at 11:02 AM

- The strongest drink I have is coffee :))) - Thank you very much for your visit and lovely comments, my friend Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

July 27, 2020 at 1:36 PM

Sad but true. Seems the alcohol drinking has picked up with this virus in our part of the country. Addictions of any kind are not good. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 2, 2020 at 7:07 AM

- Thank you very much Phyllis, for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

July 26, 2020 at 3:10 PM

Your poem seems to wind around that bottle. Nicely done!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 2, 2020 at 7:07 AM

- Thank you very much Kim, for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

July 25, 2020 at 7:43 AM

So true a description and clever pic - where do you find them - an amazing poem but sad in reality. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 25, 2020 at 1:43 PM

Hi dear sister Jenny ... I find all my photos on pinterest.com ... - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

July 24, 2020 at 10:24 PM

So well expressed, Sunshine:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 25, 2020 at 1:41 PM

- Thank you very much for your comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

July 23, 2020 at 12:15 PM

well done, anne-lise! best of luck in the contest...

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 25, 2020 at 1:40 PM

- Thank you very much Ilene, for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

July 23, 2020 at 10:32 AM

What a clever tanka, Sunshine! Can't imagine the "delirium" I'd feel after drinking an entire bottle. Nice to read your work again! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 25, 2020 at 1:39 PM

- I can not remember the last time I drank something with alcohol - we are all different ... yes thank you, for a bottle of water :) - Thank you very much for your comments, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)