S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Sedoka

Albert Einstein, a Maverick

ALBERT EINTEIN


The great soul who changed
The way we looked at ‘Nature’
With strange, mind-boggling concepts.

Space, time and  even  science
Never looked  the same, after him.
Earth-shaking results followed.

He was not a mere maverick, but a maverick of mavericks


S.Jagathsimhan Nair,   23rd Feb 12
For: Cyndi MacMillan’s  Mavericks contest.
Ps:  Written in Sedoka  form(5-7-7-5-7-7 syll). Increased syllables in the 4th line to 7 and 5th line to 8. One more line with 17 syllables added at the end.

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 15, 2012 at 11:38 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Jag. Love, Carol

Cyndi Macmillan March 14, 2012 at 9:00 PM Congrats on your win in my contest! I especially enjoyed some of the internal rhyme scheme (changed, strange). Earth shaking indeed! Thank you again for entering my contest and I am glad you enjoyed the write! Cyndi

Joe Maverick March 14, 2012 at 1:36 PM well done in the good placement here Jag.."

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 13, 2012 at 9:57 PM congrats Jag on a wonderful writ and win on this Maverick scientist and great humanitarian too..luv..

Poet Destroyer A February 25, 2012 at 10:16 AM Jag, great poem... good luck in the contest...i will send you some soup mail..in 5 minutes...thank you..pd

John Rhinem February 23, 2012 at 8:18 AM Smile ˜ Only his belief in the existence of, GOD, made him much of anything at all; Actually ˜ John!:) ˜