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Albatross

Written: September 08, 2023
Pleiades Poetry Contest                                    Sponsored by: Joseph May          
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Albatross with deft shape
Aptly walz with wingspan
Across wild oceans soars
Abstract sway and power
As stars beam with delight
Apostle verve and scop
Always burden bearer

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Kim Merryman

September 15, 2023 at 7:52 PM

Wonderfully descriptive, SP! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May

September 11, 2023 at 5:53 PM

Nicely penned Sotto, Congrats on your win

Sotto Poet

September 12, 2023 at 7:23 AM

Joseph thank you so much for reading, placing, and commenting on my humble poem, much appreciate it.

I Am Anaya

September 11, 2023 at 1:48 PM

A perfect description, I'll add that it's a large webbed foot seabird. Congratulations on your win, S.P.! Great job

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

September 10, 2023 at 1:35 PM

Excelent poem dedicated to this marvelous bird. Enjoyed it very much. Thanks María

Jan Allison

September 9, 2023 at 8:57 AM

what wonderful imagery Sotto Poet, I chose the same word, but out poems are so so different! hugs jan xx

Valsa George

September 9, 2023 at 6:05 AM

A beautiful Pleiades ! Its body is streamlined in such a way that it can smoothly glide through the air. Great entry for the contest. All the best dear Lasaad .