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Written: September 08, 2023 Pleiades Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May ________________________________________________________________ Albatross with deft shape Aptly walz with wingspan Across wild oceans soars Abstract sway and power As stars beam with delight Apostle verve and scop Always burden bearer

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Kim Merryman

Date: 9/15/2023 7:52:00 PM

Wonderfully descriptive, SP! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May

Date: 9/11/2023 5:53:00 PM

Nicely penned Sotto, Congrats on your win

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/12/2023 7:23:00 AM

Joseph thank you so much for reading, placing, and commenting on my humble poem, much appreciate it.

I Am Anaya

Date: 9/11/2023 1:48:00 PM

A perfect description, I'll add that it's a large webbed foot seabird. Congratulations on your win, S.P.! Great job

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 9/10/2023 1:35:00 PM

Excelent poem dedicated to this marvelous bird. Enjoyed it very much. Thanks María

Jan Allison

Date: 9/9/2023 8:57:00 AM

what wonderful imagery Sotto Poet, I chose the same word, but out poems are so so different! hugs jan xx

Valsa George

Date: 9/9/2023 6:05:00 AM

A beautiful Pleiades ! Its body is streamlined in such a way that it can smoothly glide through the air. Great entry for the contest. All the best dear Lasaad .

Paige Hind

Date: 9/8/2023 3:37:00 PM

A beautiful poem about the albatross! I liked your imagery!

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/8/2023 2:58:00 PM

An enjoyable read! the photo is not Albatross.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/8/2023 12:00:00 PM

- Woow, Las ... excellent :) - A top win .... congratulations in advance - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs