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Alaska Sitka Sunset

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As I near the stratosphere, I let loose an untamed, raw rainbow I pull on the tattered, worn ropes of my hand-sewn hot-air balloon across the hidden boreal quarry hill in the north they rose above the nose of a furious focus bear and whack the back legs of a swift white-tailed deer on the tips of their fingers they follow the wave's crest gliding across the shimmering bay toward the murky, muddy waterfall I reach out from the wicker basket to feel the wings of the migrating seagulls that fly south I imitate their husky honking before fading like a dandelion awe-inspiring Sitka Alaska Sunset I secure my spaceship to a sturdy sprout relax on the radiant crimson ratoon I mumble to the gray owl "Who huh huh?" said the deep dock spinning, spinning, swirling the wind whirled the canopy away as the scarlet sunset slackens into the starry sky I let go of my bulky loads and flew into the stratosphere without regard for any impediments any concerns are left behind above the clouds, I set sail Written: May 20, 2023

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Date: 5/21/2023 10:10:00 AM
To ride in a hot air balloon and just see the scenery, I would be at awe. Beautiful writing my friend with feel and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/20/2023 8:36:00 PM
wonderful poem, it is like travelling in a balloon, it works also as a metaphor, thanks for the excellent penning
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Date: 5/20/2023 4:05:00 PM
Beautiful photo and beautiful poem, my friend.
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Date: 5/20/2023 1:45:00 PM
A beautiful Alaskan Sitka Sunset, Lasaad.I love your last line: above the clouds, I set sail. Best of luck!
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