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Alaska Sitka Sunset

As I near the stratosphere, I let loose
an untamed, raw rainbow

I pull on the tattered, worn ropes
of my hand-sewn hot-air balloon across
the hidden boreal quarry hill in the north

they rose above the nose
of a furious focus bear
and whack the back legs
of a swift white-tailed deer

on the tips of their fingers
they follow the wave's crest
gliding across the shimmering bay
toward the murky, muddy waterfall

I reach out from the wicker basket
to feel the wings of the migrating seagulls that fly south

I imitate their husky honking
before fading like a dandelion
awe-inspiring Sitka Alaska Sunset

I secure my spaceship to a sturdy sprout
relax on the radiant crimson ratoon

I mumble to the gray owl
"Who huh huh?" said the deep dock
spinning, spinning, swirling

the wind whirled the canopy away
as the scarlet sunset slackens into the starry sky

I let go of my bulky loads and flew into the stratosphere
without regard for any impediments
any concerns are left behind

above the clouds, I set sail

Written: May 20, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Roper Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 10:10 AM
To ride in a hot air balloon and just see the scenery, I would be at awe. Beautiful writing my friend with feel and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Rolland Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 8:36 PM
wonderful poem, it is like travelling in a balloon, it works also as a metaphor, thanks for the excellent penning
Pandit Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 4:05 PM
Beautiful photo and beautiful poem, my friend.
Peck Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 1:45 PM
A beautiful Alaskan Sitka Sunset, Lasaad.I love your last line: above the clouds, I set sail. Best of luck!
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