Alas

Whole day passed in vain In the quest of a nimbus All null no seagull ____________________________ May 6, 2017

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/23/2017 7:45:00 AM

Hello Probir. I found this powerful and very expressive. May the light return and may we see the seagulls gliding. Your entry format and theme are all excellent. Honestly. Well done in its entirety. Enjoy the day.

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/23/2017 9:34:00 AM

Thank you ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/6/2017 7:45:00 AM

Do not believe it my friend, Probir! You of all people have accumulated so many! A 7!

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/7/2017 12:43:00 AM

The poem is a mirror of a particular time or you may say mood , not a generalized portrayal ... Thank you for your? kind comments ...

Talin Kalishian

Date: 5/6/2017 3:41:00 AM

Ay, been there my friend My dear probir ay poets ear Life is full of grass buds mud and brass Filter light inside and bond all hours never fond

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/7/2017 12:45:00 AM

Right, Talin ... Very right ... Glad to see you visiting ... Thank you ...