Alarm Clock

A buzz, a beep, a ringing bell 
That damn loud noise that comes from hell. 
It wakes me from a restful slumber 
With evil glowing flashing numbers.

What did I do to earn this fate? 
Besides stay up an hour late. 
My fuzzy brain would like to know 
From buried deep in my pillow.

Why can't I wake up to something sweet, 
A gentle breeze? A birdie's tweet? 
A soft massage or lover's touch? 
Oh no, that's asking way too much.

I contemplate my destiny 
And how I wasted yesterday 
And now must pay the sinner's dues

Ugh, this poem is lame, I'll just hit snooze!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 5/3/2009 1:30:00 PM
Minnie, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:29:00 PM
Still LOL wonderful and now your writing is a "first round survivor" ... smile ... Good luck in the contest, Minnie!!
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Date: 4/10/2009 4:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Mnnie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2009 10:01:00 PM
congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
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Date: 3/29/2009 11:12:00 AM
Far from "lame" Miss Minnie, this poem is priceless and I'm still chuckling. You've captured that moment so many of us have lived through, brillantly. This is so very deserving to have been selected as a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!!
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Date: 3/29/2009 12:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week, GB Always Tyesha
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:11:00 AM
congrats on having your poem featured this week! keep up the good work!
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Date: 3/26/2009 8:39:00 AM
Can't count how many times I've "been there, done that". Great job capturing the feeling! Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy~
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Date: 3/26/2009 7:46:00 AM
I like to shut mine off with a hammer. Congrats Minnie, on "Alarm Clock" being featured. How about one that would play Johnny and the Hurricanes "Reveille Rock"? God Bless. Vince
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Date: 3/26/2009 6:50:00 AM
This poem is not "lame" at all. I love it, love it because it expresses my sentiments perfectly. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 3/26/2009 4:18:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem to start my day. It brought a smile to my face. Congratulations on having it featured. Many smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/25/2009 11:51:00 AM
What a fun poem, and well deserving to be featured this week! I hate alarm clocks too! :) love, Carrie
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:43:00 AM
This poem is right on. Congratulations on being featured. Kirstie
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Date: 3/23/2009 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/19/2008 8:55:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Please continue with your writing and share it with the world. Write from your heart and you will go far. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2008 5:00:00 PM
~lol~ Great job! Hate that alarm. Too funny and well done! Love, Shar
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