Alarm Clock

A buzz, a beep, a ringing bell 
That damn loud noise that comes from hell. 
It wakes me from a restful slumber 
With evil glowing flashing numbers.

What did I do to earn this fate? 
Besides stay up an hour late. 
My fuzzy brain would like to know 
From buried deep in my pillow.

Why can't I wake up to something sweet, 
A gentle breeze? A birdie's tweet? 
A soft massage or lover's touch? 
Oh no, that's asking way too much.

I contemplate my destiny 
And how I wasted yesterday 
And now must pay the sinner's dues

Ugh, this poem is lame, I'll just hit snooze!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 1:30 PM
Minnie, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Mason Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 1:29 PM
Still LOL wonderful and now your writing is a "first round survivor" ... smile ... Good luck in the contest, Minnie!!
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April 10, 2009 at 4:42 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Mnnie. Love, Carol
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April 4, 2009 at 10:01 PM
congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
Mason Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 11:12 AM
Far from "lame" Miss Minnie, this poem is priceless and I'm still chuckling. You've captured that moment so many of us have lived through, brillantly. This is so very deserving to have been selected as a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!!
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March 29, 2009 at 12:21 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week, GB Always Tyesha
Lopez Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 9:11 AM
congrats on having your poem featured this week! keep up the good work!
Rider Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 8:39 AM
Can't count how many times I've "been there, done that". Great job capturing the feeling! Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy~
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 7:46 AM
I like to shut mine off with a hammer. Congrats Minnie, on "Alarm Clock" being featured. How about one that would play Johnny and the Hurricanes "Reveille Rock"? God Bless. Vince
Austin Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 6:50 AM
This poem is not "lame" at all. I love it, love it because it expresses my sentiments perfectly. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Townsend Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 4:18 AM
This is a wonderful poem to start my day. It brought a smile to my face. Congratulations on having it featured. Many smiles from Lolita
Richards Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 11:51 AM
What a fun poem, and well deserving to be featured this week! I hate alarm clocks too! :) love, Carrie
Brown Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Fontes Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 8:43 AM
This poem is right on. Congratulations on being featured. Kirstie
Winter Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 6:07 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
Brown Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 8:55 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Please continue with your writing and share it with the world. Write from your heart and you will go far. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
November 8, 2008 at 5:00 PM
~lol~ Great job! Hate that alarm. Too funny and well done! Love, Shar
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