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Alabaster Gaze - Hiku 30

Written: July 29 2025, for contest by Brian Strand *************** s t a t u k e n s n e i v e l r b ~ yet in a l a e y b a s e s t e r g m-i-l-e-s-t-o-n-e-s l k o | | g o — o a

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Valsa George

Date: 7/31/2025 9:18:00 PM

Back to your wonderful shape poem with Congratulations on your top win, dear Lasaad.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/31/2025 5:42:00 AM

I enjoyed the haiku, Lasaad!

Paige Hind

Date: 7/29/2025 9:30:00 PM

Deep, and very impressive. It's true. They do. :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/29/2025 4:03:00 PM

another marvelous creation. I enjoyed the effect and thinking about 'alabaster' gaze. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/29/2025 12:20:00 PM

- They should be called IQ - ku, Las - They are often like a puzzle to read :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 7/29/2025 4:39:00 AM

Great thought put in illustrative alignment and very impressively done. Though statues never blink, those that are set up to commemorate milestones, they speak. Best of luck, dear friend.