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Aisle Sea Ewe

Early in the mourning she rose She wood fined her boat Wear she rose across the see two the sure Their she mustard all her mite And toad the boat on the beech Butt if the thyme was write she tide it two a boy She could hardly weight Four she nose she will sea her suite sun They wood sit on a bolder, brake sum bred Then they eight a hole pair Her sun called her a deer He tolled her when he urns enough doe Ore got sum tacks witch was dew He wood by her a flour at the bizarre Witch could be tide in her hare The cent of the rows wood bee sew sheikh One knight he said she wood prophet If she past buy a different root He new the currant could get ruff The whether was no longer fare and getting two chilli She road away into the missed Aisle meat ewe next weak he balled until he was horse He trussed he wood see her next weak Only Homo’s ‘Aloud’ – Jerry T Curtis 23rd March 2015 ~awarded 1st place
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Talbot Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 6:22 PM
First plaice with aye dis stink shun. Fantastic, a mined blowing reed. Cud gnot resist ewe no watt eye am like. hugs Mick
Allison Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 1:36 AM
LOL Mick ewe maid me laugh, eye sent it to my friend who presents a radio show - he loves word play and described it as comic genius lol:-) Sadly he couldn't reed it on the radio as the humour is lost unless ewe sea it written down:-) hugs jan xx
Adams Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 7:23 AM
Wow! I think you must of used all there was!! I especially liked, Tide it two a boy, and road away into the missed! Well done!
Allison Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 10:34 AM
I had such fun with this poem - sent it to my friend who is a radio presenter and he described it as 'comic genius' lol:-) hugs jan xx
White Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Ahahahaa, I LOVE this one Jan I was laughing so loud here :D
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 10:24 AM
I got a first place for this one - I think there were only 3 places so i was delighted:-) hugs jan xx
Garg Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 9:31 AM
Enjoyed a lot. congrats on your great win.... Archana
Allison Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 12:28 PM
Thanks so much Archana:-) Hugs Jan xx
Nunez Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 4:41 AM
LOL! You were in your element on this one, really! Congrats, my friend! Kim :)
Allison Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 5:03 AM
Thanks Kim I really enjoyed this challenge and was elated to get the top spot:-) Hugs Jan xx
Ackerson Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 8:16 PM
Ha! Witty, witty, witty! Well done, Jan!
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 8:19 PM
Thanks Mark it really was a challenge Jerry set us and i was so happy to get awarded the top place:-)Hugs Jan xx
Sergi Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 8:11 AM
Hi Jan: A beautiful poem on homophones and very cleverly done!
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 8:15 AM
Thanks so much Ralph I was absolutely delighted to clinch the top spot:-) Hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 11:40 PM
amazing..... SKAT
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 4:47 AM
Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 5:47 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win a 7. Blessings and hugs eve
Allison Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 5:49 PM
Thanks so much Eve I have done really well in contests this week am absolutely delighted with my success:-) Hugs Jan xx
Leiser Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 2:09 PM
Hi Jan! Congrats on your first place win!! I read your poem here a while back when you first posted it, and I knew even then how good it was! Very clever and well done, as this was a challenging contest :)
Allison Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 2:17 PM
Thanks so much Laura - I did find it a challenge and I was so pleased Jerry liked it so much:-) hugs Jan xx
Konos Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Absolutely stunning! wow
Allison Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 1:22 PM
I am absolutely stunned Judy just delighted Jerry liked my poem so much:-) Hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 9:54 AM
So glad to see you in top spot in a very elite unshared position. I'm proud of you Jan!
Allison Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 12:19 PM
Thank you so much Richard I do appreciate that wonderful comment :-) Hugs jan xx
May Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Eye sea that you are number won...Congrats on a grate win Jan...hugs
Allison Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 12:18 PM
LOL thank you sew much Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 7:25 AM
Hey Jan, congratulations on your First Place win! You did a great job with this difficult challenge, but I knew it would be a winner! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 12:18 PM
Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Reams Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 7:25 AM
Fantastic write Jan! Congrats on your 1st place win!
Allison Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 12:17 PM
Thanks so much Tammy I am over the moon! Hugs jan xx
Gochee Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 6:05 AM
Souper Kool! Eye'm empress'd.
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 6:28 AM
LOL Thanks Maggie:-) Hugs jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 1:14 PM
Otter den ah cup pull of heir hers inn punk shoe eh shun. Diss hiss ah fava four mice elf!
Allison Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 3:54 PM
lol thanks handsome:-) Hugs jan xx
May Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 10:07 PM
lol...You did a grate job with this right Jan...hope to sea it as # 1
Allison Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 3:00 AM
Thanks Joseph it is quite a challenge:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 4:59 PM
Amazing, Jan! I am having a real mental block with doing this, but yours so full homophones! This should do really great in the contest! Best wishes, Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 5:09 PM
Thanks Sandra it is quite a challenge:-) Hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Top marks + + Jan for this very clever piece. It's definitely a winner, hugs // James :) xx :)
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 3:37 PM
I write and hope James - if I get placed great if not then at least I had a go at the challenge - more important things in life as we both know my friend:-) Hugs jan xx
Nunez Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 11:20 AM
LOL! Gurl, ewe shore oar ohsum!
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 11:39 AM
Thanks so much Kim it is quite a challenge:-) Hugs jan xx
Kiser Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 9:31 AM
That was sheer brilliance!
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 11:39 AM
Oh ML I am blushing now thank you:-) Hugs Jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 8:35 AM
Wow an outstanding work Jan ! Gl in contest!
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 11:38 AM
Thanks Dr Sharma it is quite a challenge:-) Hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 8:06 AM
Bravo, Whey to go!
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 11:38 AM
LOL Thanks Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx
Nance Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 6:53 AM
LOVE IT! great job with this, a winner in my book, 7 and hugs xxx ;)
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 7:37 AM
Thanks Cas - it is quite a challenge:-) hugs jan xx
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