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Early in the mourning she rose She wood fined her boat Wear she rose across the see two the sure Their she mustard all her mite And toad the boat on the beech Butt if the thyme was write she tide it two a boy She could hardly weight Four she nose she will sea her suite sun They wood sit on a bolder, brake sum bred Then they eight a hole pair Her sun called her a deer He tolled her when he urns enough doe Ore got sum tacks witch was dew He wood by her a flour at the bizarre Witch could be tide in her hare The cent of the rows wood bee sew sheikh One knight he said she wood prophet If she past buy a different root He new the currant could get ruff The whether was no longer fare and getting two chilli She road away into the missed Aisle meat ewe next weak he balled until he was horse He trussed he wood see her next weak Only Homo’s ‘Aloud’ – Jerry T Curtis 23rd March 2015 ~awarded 1st place

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Date: 5/13/2018 6:22:00 PM
First plaice with aye dis stink shun. Fantastic, a mined blowing reed. Cud gnot resist ewe no watt eye am like. hugs Mick
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Date: 5/14/2018 1:36:00 AM
LOL Mick ewe maid me laugh, eye sent it to my friend who presents a radio show - he loves word play and described it as comic genius lol:-) Sadly he couldn't reed it on the radio as the humour is lost unless ewe sea it written down:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/7/2018 7:23:00 AM
Wow! I think you must of used all there was!! I especially liked, Tide it two a boy, and road away into the missed! Well done!
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Date: 5/7/2018 10:34:00 AM
I had such fun with this poem - sent it to my friend who is a radio presenter and he described it as 'comic genius' lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/21/2016 10:01:00 AM
Ahahahaa, I LOVE this one Jan I was laughing so loud here :D
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Date: 9/21/2016 10:24:00 AM
I got a first place for this one - I think there were only 3 places so i was delighted:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/3/2015 9:31:00 AM
Enjoyed a lot. congrats on your great win.... Archana
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Date: 5/3/2015 12:28:00 PM
Thanks so much Archana:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/3/2015 4:41:00 AM
LOL! You were in your element on this one, really! Congrats, my friend! Kim :)
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Date: 5/3/2015 5:03:00 AM
Thanks Kim I really enjoyed this challenge and was elated to get the top spot:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/2/2015 8:16:00 PM
Ha! Witty, witty, witty! Well done, Jan!
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Date: 5/2/2015 8:19:00 PM
Thanks Mark it really was a challenge Jerry set us and i was so happy to get awarded the top place:-)Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/2/2015 8:11:00 AM
Hi Jan: A beautiful poem on homophones and very cleverly done!
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Date: 5/2/2015 8:15:00 AM
Thanks so much Ralph I was absolutely delighted to clinch the top spot:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/2/2015 12:00:00 AM
Jan.. Congrats in the contest, you're the well deserved Top Cat!
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Date: 5/2/2015 4:49:00 AM
It's my second first place in my own right as I also got the top spot in Vienna's contest - just wish Darren was around to see I am flying high:-( Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/1/2015 11:40:00 PM
amazing..... SKAT
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Date: 5/2/2015 4:47:00 AM
Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/1/2015 5:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win a 7. Blessings and hugs eve
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Date: 5/1/2015 5:49:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve I have done really well in contests this week am absolutely delighted with my success:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/1/2015 2:09:00 PM
Hi Jan! Congrats on your first place win!! I read your poem here a while back when you first posted it, and I knew even then how good it was! Very clever and well done, as this was a challenging contest :)
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Date: 5/1/2015 2:17:00 PM
Thanks so much Laura - I did find it a challenge and I was so pleased Jerry liked it so much:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/1/2015 1:16:00 PM
Absolutely stunning! wow
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Date: 5/1/2015 1:22:00 PM
I am absolutely stunned Judy just delighted Jerry liked my poem so much:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/1/2015 9:54:00 AM
So glad to see you in top spot in a very elite unshared position. I'm proud of you Jan!
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Date: 5/1/2015 12:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Richard I do appreciate that wonderful comment :-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 5/1/2015 9:12:00 AM
Eye sea that you are number won...Congrats on a grate win Jan...hugs
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Date: 5/1/2015 12:18:00 PM
LOL thank you sew much Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/1/2015 7:25:00 AM
Hey Jan, congratulations on your First Place win! You did a great job with this difficult challenge, but I knew it would be a winner! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/1/2015 12:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/1/2015 7:25:00 AM
Fantastic write Jan! Congrats on your 1st place win!
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Date: 5/1/2015 12:17:00 PM
Thanks so much Tammy I am over the moon! Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/10/2015 6:05:00 AM
Souper Kool! Eye'm empress'd.
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Date: 4/10/2015 6:28:00 AM
LOL Thanks Maggie:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/25/2015 1:14:00 PM
Otter den ah cup pull of heir hers inn punk shoe eh shun. Diss hiss ah fava four mice elf!
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Date: 3/25/2015 3:54:00 PM
lol thanks handsome:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/24/2015 10:07:00 PM
lol...You did a grate job with this right Jan...hope to sea it as # 1
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Date: 3/25/2015 3:00:00 AM
Thanks Joseph it is quite a challenge:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/24/2015 4:59:00 PM
Amazing, Jan! I am having a real mental block with doing this, but yours so full homophones! This should do really great in the contest! Best wishes, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/24/2015 5:09:00 PM
Thanks Sandra it is quite a challenge:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/24/2015 3:35:00 PM
Top marks + + Jan for this very clever piece. It's definitely a winner, hugs // James :) xx :)
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Date: 3/24/2015 3:37:00 PM
I write and hope James - if I get placed great if not then at least I had a go at the challenge - more important things in life as we both know my friend:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/24/2015 11:20:00 AM
LOL! Gurl, ewe shore oar ohsum!
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Date: 3/24/2015 11:39:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim it is quite a challenge:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/24/2015 9:31:00 AM
That was sheer brilliance!
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Date: 3/24/2015 11:39:00 AM
Oh ML I am blushing now thank you:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/24/2015 8:35:00 AM
Wow an outstanding work Jan ! Gl in contest!
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Date: 3/24/2015 11:38:00 AM
Thanks Dr Sharma it is quite a challenge:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/24/2015 8:06:00 AM
Bravo, Whey to go!
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Date: 3/24/2015 11:38:00 AM
LOL Thanks Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx
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