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2025  Poetry Marathon Mile 10 : Poetry Contest

Sponsor:  Mark Toney

23/8/3025

 

Airport Waiting

At the Airport, waiting for the plane,
I look around and see
Heads all down, screens alight, conversation naught.
People sitting, concentrating, fingers flying,
No discussion, silently watching, no hello or goodbye.   
Laptops open, Apps displaying, checking data shown
Facebook posting, message sending, emails answered too.
Chips are crunching; gum is popping, and eyes all down,
Earphones hanging, noiseless watching, I silently smile.
Unknown people, business minding, waiting patiently,
Silent sitting, people staring, no expression shown.
Books are open, pages turning, another chapter gone,
I am writing, quietly observing, time is ticking by 
Anxiously waiting, stand or seated, lined up for the call.
Arms are crossing, legs are stretching, others pacing around, 
Delay in boarding, steward calling, apologies announced.
People wriggling, children whining, boredom rising fast,
Glitch in system, technology failing, repairs still underway.
Times a ticking, people sighing, hoping not too long,
Boarding happening, bags now gathered, priority passengers called.
Gates have opened, people moving, stewards checking pass,
Seats now filling, belts all fastened, purring engine heard. 
People chatting, lights are shining, doors are all closed,
Announcement broadcast, safety demo, wheels are rolling down.
Captain speaking, welcome given, lift off happening, too late now, 
Sit relaxing; we are flying, finally homeward bound.
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August 17, 2022 at 5:17 PM
Great poem Christine so spot on….and I dislike all that!!! Airports and flying not something I enjoy very little and yet have done a lot of it! Enjoyed my friend…..Debx
Watts Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 9:38 PM
Hi Deb Thanks so much and yes it is getting worse now with the delays all the time. Hmmm not sure maybe I will take a bigger book lol Cheers Chris
Fowler Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 4:02 PM
Oh so true these days Christine. Congratulations on your win! Linda
Watts Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 4:36 AM
Hi Linda Thank you very much. I was surprised to find out I had made the winners page and i don’t think much has changed except flights are delayed or cancelled a lot these days Cheers Christine
Volumes Avatar
July 9, 2022 at 5:51 AM
Christine your observant words insist that your poem is read with a steady rhythm. Its impossible to divert from the beat of the poem. Seeing, feeling, hearing, all the familiar activities, that are encompassed by the simple act of going home. Love it ! You are a master of painting a colourful picture with black on white words.
Watts Avatar
July 9, 2022 at 7:18 AM
Hi Wendy Thanks so much Your words are encouraging Yes these are my observations while waiting to board after a delay People watching very interesting Cheers Christine
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