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Air Balloon High, Then Low

~ ~DURING THE RIDE~ ~
high waves sheer lunette
miles of lithium popping  haze
air carousels swoon

crisp thrills up up there
mountain cones scaling bite-size
crazed arms touching moon

~ ~ AFTER THE RIDE~ ~
why, what's so funny
with wonderbra i'm wearing
down my waist, floppy!



 (( for S*K*A*T's  air balloon ride contest :))

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2010

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Constance La France Date: 6/19/2016 1:09:00 PM Nette, congratulations on having your poem featured for this week ~ Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/14/2011 4:01:00 AM Congratulations Nette on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 1/10/2011 10:55:00 PM Congrats Nette on your well deserved win in the contest! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/10/2011 5:48:00 PM Nette,, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d. Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 1/10/2011 2:52:00 PM A great write which I loved from the first time I read it... Congrats my dear...luv Michael Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 1/10/2011 11:37:00 AM Oh my Nette, you have this Highlander chuckling big style here. Mega funny congrats on your koolio win....:) Login to Reply

Daniel Cwiak Date: 1/10/2011 10:16:00 AM Isn't the balloon supposed to be floppy after the ride, Nette? hahaah Congrats on your win in the contest with this interesting write. Dan C Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/10/2011 8:26:00 AM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/10/2011 7:38:00 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat, nette Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/10/2011 7:15:00 AM hahaha, that last one is so cute. And the middle one is my favorite! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 1/10/2011 3:03:00 AM Congratulations on your awesome win in the contest Nette ;-) WN Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 1/10/2011 2:57:00 AM Many congratulations for this wonderful win Nette Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/9/2011 11:43:00 PM Congrats Nette my friend on your super success in Irma's hot air balloon contest with this magical ride of an entry... enjoy your flight to the top of the charts tonight with luv.. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 1/9/2011 10:09:00 PM NETTE, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUR WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~SKAT Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 12/11/2010 11:31:00 PM oh my gosh-- haha what a way to end this fun air balloon series, Nette :) I'm sure this will be among the winners ;) hope you're having a great weekend :) -- nikko :) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/11/2010 5:57:00 AM Hi Nette.. hope u are feeling better today and having a pleasant weekend my friend with luv.. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/10/2010 8:29:00 AM NEW SOUP MAIL..Nette.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/9/2010 8:35:00 PM I love that middle one the best, Nette. It's gorgeous and passionate! Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 12/9/2010 6:59:00 AM LOL -- Such a funny closing verse in this haiku series, Nette. Had a good laugh reading it and was delighted by the imagery in the first two. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/9/2010 6:51:00 AM OH HA HA Nette ... Irma will luv this entry .. so cool and so funny ... enjoyed this ride immensely luv... did the wonderbra make it home OK? haha.. wonderful Nette.. good luck .. with luv.. Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 12/9/2010 6:12:00 AM Exciting and a very silly ending ! Great write dear poet ! You'll never get this bra-less wonder up there ! *smiles* much love, james Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/9/2010 5:36:00 AM Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry today Nette and the best to you in the contest. I enjoyed reading it and I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/9/2010 4:36:00 AM Enjoyed the ride in the air balloon particularly the second one, nette Login to Reply

Cecil Hickman Date: 12/8/2010 9:08:00 PM such a treasure to read, made me laugh for sure I could see it all,, uh oh well maybe not..any way all the best in this contest along with others,,and Thank you for your words that you leave behind after you visit my words,,,Blessings..Cecil Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 12/8/2010 8:59:00 PM Hahah. Good one Nette. All the best for the contest. Login to Reply

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