Nette Onclaud Poet Haiku

Air Balloon High, Then Low

~ ~DURING THE RIDE~ ~
high waves sheer lunette
miles of lithium popping  haze
air carousels swoon

crisp thrills up up there
mountain cones scaling bite-size
crazed arms touching moon

~ ~ AFTER THE RIDE~ ~
why, what's so funny
with wonderbra i'm wearing
down my waist, floppy!



 (( for S*K*A*T's  air balloon ride contest :))

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Constance La France June 19, 2016 at 1:09 PM Nette, congratulations on having your poem featured for this week ~

Carol Sunshine Brown January 14, 2011 at 4:01 AM Congratulations Nette on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol

Kash Poet January 10, 2011 at 10:55 PM Congrats Nette on your well deserved win in the contest!

Poet Destroyer A January 10, 2011 at 5:48 PM Nette,, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico January 10, 2011 at 2:52 PM A great write which I loved from the first time I read it... Congrats my dear...luv Michael

James Fraser January 10, 2011 at 11:37 AM Oh my Nette, you have this Highlander chuckling big style here. Mega funny congrats on your koolio win....:)

Daniel Cwiak January 10, 2011 at 10:16 AM Isn't the balloon supposed to be floppy after the ride, Nette? hahaah Congrats on your win in the contest with this interesting write. Dan C

Sara Kendrick January 10, 2011 at 8:26 AM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta January 10, 2011 at 7:38 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat, nette

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2011 at 7:15 AM hahaha, that last one is so cute. And the middle one is my favorite! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels January 10, 2011 at 3:03 AM Congratulations on your awesome win in the contest Nette ;-) WN

Tahera Mannan January 10, 2011 at 2:57 AM Many congratulations for this wonderful win Nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 9, 2011 at 11:43 PM Congrats Nette my friend on your super success in Irma's hot air balloon contest with this magical ride of an entry... enjoy your flight to the top of the charts tonight with luv..

Skat A January 9, 2011 at 10:09 PM NETTE, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUR WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~SKAT

Kabuteng P.Ink K. December 11, 2010 at 11:31 PM oh my gosh-- haha what a way to end this fun air balloon series, Nette :) I'm sure this will be among the winners ;) hope you're having a great weekend :) -- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 11, 2010 at 5:57 AM Hi Nette.. hope u are feeling better today and having a pleasant weekend my friend with luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 10, 2010 at 8:29 AM NEW SOUP MAIL..Nette..

Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2010 at 8:35 PM I love that middle one the best, Nette. It's gorgeous and passionate! Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire December 9, 2010 at 6:59 AM LOL -- Such a funny closing verse in this haiku series, Nette. Had a good laugh reading it and was delighted by the imagery in the first two. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 9, 2010 at 6:51 AM OH HA HA Nette ... Irma will luv this entry .. so cool and so funny ... enjoyed this ride immensely luv... did the wonderbra make it home OK? haha.. wonderful Nette.. good luck .. with luv..

James Peranteau December 9, 2010 at 6:12 AM Exciting and a very silly ending ! Great write dear poet ! You'll never get this bra-less wonder up there ! *smiles* much love, james

Carol Sunshine Brown December 9, 2010 at 5:36 AM Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry today Nette and the best to you in the contest. I enjoyed reading it and I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta December 9, 2010 at 4:36 AM Enjoyed the ride in the air balloon particularly the second one, nette

Cecil Hickman December 8, 2010 at 9:08 PM such a treasure to read, made me laugh for sure I could see it all,, uh oh well maybe not..any way all the best in this contest along with others,,and Thank you for your words that you leave behind after you visit my words,,,Blessings..Cecil

Tahera Mannan December 8, 2010 at 8:59 PM Hahah. Good one Nette. All the best for the contest.

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