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Aim Awry - Footles

Stupid
Cupid

“Aim’s off!”
I scoff

His bow
Hit low

Beau's voice
Once choice

Awry	
Now high




*Entry for Dane Ann’s Valentine Footles contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

March 9, 2012 at 8:35 AM

It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Carolyn. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on mine. Love, Carol

Sean Kelly

February 20, 2012 at 8:45 AM

" YOUR AIM : CLASS GAME " . Another bull's eye from your talented pen , CD, and well deserved ....

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 17, 2012 at 1:51 PM

Congrats on your win! Blessings,Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

February 17, 2012 at 9:34 AM

hahahaha, I remember this one. GREAT that you won.

Debbie Guzzi

February 16, 2012 at 2:24 PM

I've been calling Carolyn...I wish I was close enough to stop by! Congrad's Light & Love

Samual Ronthorpe

February 16, 2012 at 10:23 AM

Carolyn, A very clever set of Footles, I really enjoyed them. Congratulations for your 4th place win in Dane Ann's contest.......S.Ronthorpe

Joyce Johnson

February 16, 2012 at 8:49 AM

Congratulations on your win with these cute footles. They will be running through my head all day now. Love, joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 16, 2012 at 8:47 AM

Congrats on your win Carolyn. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 16, 2012 at 8:42 AM

congrats Carolyn on a great win for a great set of Fottles for Valentine's Day luv..

Black Eyed Susan

February 16, 2012 at 7:48 AM

Stupid cupid is so funny! about time someone told him the truth! ha! congrats on your win!

Jack Horne

February 8, 2012 at 1:49 PM

LOL, love these footles : )

Wilma Neels

February 8, 2012 at 11:31 AM

Yikes now you got me smiling Carolyn, glad you could get the new computer and good to be reading your work again. All the best for the contest, love you Wilma

Charmaine Chircop

February 8, 2012 at 8:01 AM

I love you footle Sweet Caroline,How are you?

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 7, 2012 at 10:12 PM

Your footles are so cute and clever! With the divorce rate more than 50 percent, I guess cupid does miss sometimes. I loved reading your poems tonight. Blessings, Rhonda

Kash Poet

February 7, 2012 at 8:20 PM

Very Good Set of Footles by you Carolyn.A winner here.Best wishes.

Andrea Dietrich

February 7, 2012 at 7:46 PM

haha, you did a really cute little set, CArolyn. Sure to be a HIT!!!

Deck Fitzgerald

February 7, 2012 at 5:33 PM

Best of luck with this lovely fun read Carolyn , Hugs and best wishes Declan xx

Russell Sivey

February 7, 2012 at 5:28 PM

What a great poem my friend! I especially likes the first footle, "Stupid Cupid" that one is pretty funny! It flows very well! I love them all Carolyn! Great Work!!

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