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sea as calm as glass adrift on the gentle swells a black fin circling

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/16/2014 6:59:00 PM
A wonderful haiku congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/8/2014 8:22:00 PM
yes, This is what I am talking about. This is a good haiku for me!!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:57:00 PM
Wud really be a must see sight Barbara! Very lovely haiku n great win! Congrats!
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Date: 8/8/2014 11:52:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/8/2014 1:29:00 AM
A very clear picture you have painted well, Barb
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Date: 8/4/2014 5:51:00 PM
I love these haikus about the black finned dolphin ;). Nice one Barbara!
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Date: 8/3/2014 8:12:00 PM
nice one, barbara! i can picture it so clearly...
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Date: 8/3/2014 7:39:00 PM
Good one, Barbara. Good luck!
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Date: 8/3/2014 5:52:00 PM
niceeee..good luck..I've actually seen a sea that looked like glass it's an amazing sight
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Date: 8/3/2014 5:34:00 PM
Watch out and stay out of the water :) hugs Tim
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Date: 8/3/2014 5:03:00 PM
Oh scaryyyyy! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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