Aha: a Poetic Noetic Instantiation In Three Acts

Aha: a Poetic Noetic Instantiation in Three Acts rushing inference, imminent insight suddenly it’s clear, a gut feeling— swooning, reeling, cross-connected hemispheres syncopated, reverberated, totally aware open byways, ahh blue-sky days, making up my mind synapses shiver, axons quiver, dendrites deliver, ’lectrik neurons fire—suddenly—in time aha! aha! oh gawd I see—I ran around ’n cried— a fool I’ve been; all along it’s there, right in front of me with a grin ’n a nod ’n twinkly-looking ’round raised my arms ’n slapped my thighs ’n made a ruckus sound— donned my hat ’n set it skewed upon my big bright head, set off to town in an uplifted mood, while whistling a sweet sound— forgot what I had found # there’s a hole in my head where the wounds of reason seep; all words are dead inside my head— what’s left is dark ’n deep @ I’ll always live and always die on the event horizon of my mind’s eye, where the flash of neuronal fires flowers into sudden epiphany— --

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/1/2025 9:53:00 PM
This Poem is a guide for the soul. It shows that the path to truth involves the ecstatic joy of discovery, the courageous silence of letting go, and the wisdom to live peacefully at the very edge of the great mystery.
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Date: 2/25/2010 11:50:00 AM
my youtube rendition in animation http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cOwgE18iuUQ
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Date: 4/21/2009 10:59:00 AM
Beautiful. Find a musician; you can sing it. All the best.
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Date: 3/26/2009 4:01:00 PM
I love the way you started out using sophistocated-scientific descriptions and brought it down to something easily forgotten. Then, the disambiguate and ambiguate writes brought it full circle with ...where the flash of neronal fires flower into sudden infinity...and there you go again with that complex thinking. ..an eternal circle of intelligence. I enjoyed it...
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Date: 3/25/2009 4:51:00 PM
"Open byways, ahh, blue sky days," Wow, Jerry. Excellent use of language, rhyme and imagery. I can almost hear this as a song!
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