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Ah Vegas

Ah Vegas You call me now In ways no longer reserved For asylum jingles or perverse tours of duty Those missions have been won Decorated in myth Perpetuated by views and cues As wartorn players revel In memories Gaunt from melted time Quantum distance And duty laden with mirth-like urgency Oh Vegas You're still my girl Always fond of freedom's sweets You lavishly pour my way I still promenade with the throngs The cousins you deliver upon arrival All in tandem, synced in mood Joy tendered from precious metals Imported by the river's greedy decree Flowing in by buckets Trickling out by accidental drops Leaked from diseased spittoons I watch this Through eyes singed by hemlock's past Through windows sealed by labor's virtue Balance, I conclude Has been achieved As past wickedness Forced hands Grips firmly in rhythm The beat remains yet modulates To soulful prancing and mitigated madness Since these glowing tapestries These ardent vats adorned By Satan's grotto No longer sting of zest and legend Which endure through Dust, illusion and amplified pride Meant to inspire the next of kin The bonus babies Destined to sketch The next chapters of glee gone awry. (6/16/08)

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Date: 3/10/2016 10:44:00 PM
Hi, Suburban, lol...thanks for the reply... I love Vegas. In my dreams i work the Casinos. Lol... you should at least tell me one of your Vegas adventures. I' talked about Vegas for years. And when I had the chance to visit, I passed it up. Still on my bucket list... hugs...Linda
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Date: 3/10/2016 12:11:00 PM
Suburban, I want to go, awesome poem... the jingles, mission, of it all... one day on my bucket list... I give your poem a 7, but truly I think it's a 10. Love every deep meaning and metaphor. LINDA
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Date: 3/10/2016 8:15:00 PM
Wow, feedback from a Soup Hall of Famer, I am so honored and humbled, thank you....Vegas is a phenomena, it's changed visibly and drastically since I first visited in '82, yet it remains a license for whatever you need it to be...I could tell you stories (and somehow I managed to survive them lol)...Love, Subby
Date: 2/27/2016 11:03:00 PM
Loved "Windows sealed by labors virtue"...and the last seven lines are great. Good job, keep um coming. Best wishes, Charlie
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Suburban Lovechild
Date: 3/10/2016 8:10:00 PM
Thx Charlie, Vegas can do that to you...Love, Subby

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