Ah, To Age, To Ripen, To Mature

Ah, to age, to ripen, to mature
to grow sated in one’s being
embracing both weed and bud
the royal effete and the undignified.

To observe the nature of the wind
absorb the lessons of the sun
bask in the aura of moonlit mystery
sample the sustenance of spring rains.

To know and yet be teachable
feel yet not grow numb
touch yet leave no mark
see and still believe.

To age, as gnarled perennials,
wrinkled rings to date the times
deep roots, bowed backs
hearts carved in splitting bark.



©6/4/2019

A contest on aging Poetry Contest
Emile Pinet sponsor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 7/1/2019 2:25:00 PM
Congrats! Like the line, "to know and yet be teachable". This is quality I've witnessed for 50 years, people don't want to do ... be teachable! Especially about Bible ...hold to old unscriptural false hoods, because enjoy, not because right. You wrote an excellent poem, that deserved to win!!! Congrats again.
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Date: 6/26/2019 3:45:00 PM
Wonderful poem on the process of growing old , John , congratulations on your win.
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John Lawless
Date: 6/27/2019 9:28:00 PM
Thanks Eve, aging - the aftermath of ripening
Date: 6/26/2019 1:38:00 PM
This is wonderful John! Congratulations on your deserving win! : )
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John Lawless
Date: 6/27/2019 9:26:00 PM
Thanks Connie
Date: 6/26/2019 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations John! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge but your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
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John Lawless
Date: 6/27/2019 9:24:00 PM
Thank You Emile, always an honor to place in one of your contest. Thanks for taking the time and energy to sponsor such contests.
Date: 6/8/2019 10:15:00 AM
wow, you did an incredible job here, JOhn. Wish I could be as creative in talking about aging. All I can think to do is use humor because it's all so laughable to me!
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John Lawless
Date: 6/27/2019 9:23:00 PM
Yeah, Andrea, growing old ain't for sissies especially when you have to download(no pun intended) the nearest potty app.
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