Ah Oh

Cacophony of rage; hatchling is gone. Mockingbird awaits its prey; Cat may have a sore rear!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2018 3:19:00 PM

ha! Awesome last line!!

Silent One

Date: 10/5/2018 5:14:00 AM

oooh... poor cat!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/8/2018 7:05:00 AM

A very true story; it took about 10 weeks to heal.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/4/2018 3:21:00 PM

I would not want to go up against a mockingbird!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/4/2018 8:20:00 PM

They are formidable. Thanks again.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/4/2018 7:41:00 AM

Uh-oh! Watch out, Mr. Cat.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/4/2018 8:23:00 AM

Yes, I had one growing up that came in, one day with a big red and white hole in his butt; my Mom cleaned it and put some medicine and a big old Kotex around it; he had to be carried in, out, to and from his box and meals; it was so painful for him to walk. When he was healed and able to go out again; we noticed the mocking birds, dive-bombing him from both sides. We got him back inside and that's where he stayed until their little ones had flown away. Thanks.