Agony

Sound of dying trees
Covered with orange and red
Such a wondrous death.

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Barbara Gorelick

June 11, 2013 at 6:58 PM

I think this is the first piece of yours Ive read. I like, and congrats. BG

Skat A

June 11, 2013 at 4:34 PM

a very gripping poem....... Shirley, good luck in the contest...........*Skat

Duke Beaufort

June 10, 2013 at 3:36 PM

Someone wrote a poem about the leaves on trees dying and floating away as an allegory for children leaving their family or mother. It was sad. It is remarkable how you have written about the cycle of life in such a positive and beautiful way.

Shirley Candy

June 10, 2013 at 7:54 PM

Without sadness there is no joy. Vice versa. Thank you for taking times commenting on my poems. Really appreciate it. :)

Poet Tacito

June 9, 2013 at 10:22 PM

As if Mother Nature was giving the new life, away from this world...this was very deep in such few lines. Wonderful job!

Poet Tacito

June 10, 2013 at 6:10 PM

I couldn't agree more with you.

Shirley Candy

June 10, 2013 at 11:24 AM

I wish people can be more caring of the nature of the future goodness.. :/

Andrea Dietrich

June 9, 2013 at 4:29 PM

This is so interesting, making the silent trees have sound!!! sound thru color!

Shirley Candy

June 9, 2013 at 6:05 PM

Thank you for the review, Andrea :)

Mustapha Mohammed

June 9, 2013 at 3:49 PM

I like your haiku Shirley.I think the title threw me off a bit when I read your lovely Haiku.

Shirley Candy

June 9, 2013 at 4:00 PM

Although haiku actually should not be entitled.. :D

Shirley Candy

June 9, 2013 at 3:59 PM

Thank you for the comment, M :) I used the word "agony" as title to describe the intense feelings of suffering of the dying nature, which is very lamentable.

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