Agony

Sound of dying trees Covered with orange and red Such a wondrous death.

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Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/11/2013 6:58:00 PM

I think this is the first piece of yours Ive read. I like, and congrats. BG

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2013 4:34:00 PM

a very gripping poem....... Shirley, good luck in the contest...........*Skat

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/10/2013 3:36:00 PM

Someone wrote a poem about the leaves on trees dying and floating away as an allegory for children leaving their family or mother. It was sad. It is remarkable how you have written about the cycle of life in such a positive and beautiful way.

Shirley Candy
Date: 6/10/2013 7:54:00 PM

Without sadness there is no joy. Vice versa. Thank you for taking times commenting on my poems. Really appreciate it. :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/9/2013 10:22:00 PM

As if Mother Nature was giving the new life, away from this world...this was very deep in such few lines. Wonderful job!

Poet Tacito
Date: 6/10/2013 6:10:00 PM

I couldn't agree more with you.

Shirley Candy
Date: 6/10/2013 11:24:00 AM

I wish people can be more caring of the nature of the future goodness.. :/

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2013 4:29:00 PM

This is so interesting, making the silent trees have sound!!! sound thru color!

Shirley Candy
Date: 6/9/2013 6:05:00 PM

Thank you for the review, Andrea :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 6/9/2013 3:49:00 PM

I like your haiku Shirley.I think the title threw me off a bit when I read your lovely Haiku.

Shirley Candy
Date: 6/9/2013 4:00:00 PM

Although haiku actually should not be entitled.. :D

Shirley Candy
Date: 6/9/2013 3:59:00 PM

Thank you for the comment, M :) I used the word "agony" as title to describe the intense feelings of suffering of the dying nature, which is very lamentable.