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Aglow In the Night Sky

Dazzling is moonlight
transcending glimmering stars
Ornament hung in night's sky
Lustrous orb that rules
ebb and flow of ocean tides
Radiance glows o'er lovers


9/7/2017
Moonlight Delight contest
hosted by: Russell Sivey

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John Michaels

Date: 11/5/2017 12:16:00 PM

Great Sedoka with some lovely imagery. Congratulations on your win, Lin! Kind regards, John.

Wilfred Aniagyei

Date: 9/11/2017 8:36:00 AM

Nice to read this on my day back..... lovely

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2017 9:43:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting. Welcome back, Wilfred.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/10/2017 12:47:00 PM

Many congratulations Lin I knew it would be a big winner:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2017 9:42:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jan.

Seren Roberts

Date: 9/10/2017 4:18:00 AM

Congratulations Lin....Seren

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2017 9:42:00 AM

Thanks and the congratulations are coming your way as well.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/9/2017 11:28:00 PM

Congratulation on your well deserved win, Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2017 9:42:00 AM

Thank you, Subimal.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/9/2017 4:50:00 PM

I love this Lin! Big congratulations on your first placement! : )

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2017 9:42:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Connie.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2017 1:56:00 PM

- Congratulations on your beautiful 1st place, Lin :) - (Hope all is well with your family ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2017 9:41:00 AM

All is well with my family. Irma didn't do much damage to them. Thanks for asking and for the comments, Anne-Lise.

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/9/2017 10:28:00 AM

Back to pat your back, congratulations Dear Lady...

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2017 9:41:00 AM

I'll take the pat and give you a hug, Charlie. Thank you.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 9/9/2017 8:39:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2017 9:40:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Dale.

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/9/2017 8:22:00 AM

Back to Congrats!!!...yahoo!!!

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2017 9:40:00 AM

Thank you kindly, WW.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/9/2017 8:13:00 AM

This is gorgeous, Lin, I just adore it ... blessings and congrats on your win! I'm fav-ing this! <3

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2017 9:40:00 AM

Thanks for the wonderful remarks and the faving, Greg.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/9/2017 6:44:00 AM

Congratulations Lin :)

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2017 9:39:00 AM

Thanks, Heidi.

John Michaels

Date: 9/9/2017 5:49:00 AM

Lovely write, Lin... and a great title! Congratulations on your First Place win! The influence of the moon on the tides reminds me of a Haiku I wrote a few years ago (Gravity); you may like it. All the best, John.

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2017 9:39:00 AM

Thank you ever so much, John.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/8/2017 5:20:00 AM

- Oh, this was beautiful - A winning poem, Lin - GL !!! - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane
Date: 9/8/2017 2:14:00 PM

It makes me happy that you think it's beautiful. Thank you, Anne-Lise.