Lin Lane Poet Sedoka

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Aglow In the Night Sky

Dazzling is moonlight
transcending glimmering stars
Ornament hung in night's sky
Lustrous orb that rules
ebb and flow of ocean tides
Radiance glows o'er lovers


9/7/2017
Moonlight Delight contest
hosted by: Russell Sivey

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John Michaels November 5, 2017 at 12:16 PM Great Sedoka with some lovely imagery. Congratulations on your win, Lin! Kind regards, John.

Wilfred Aniagyei September 11, 2017 at 8:36 AM Nice to read this on my day back..... lovely Lin Lane September 15, 2017 at 9:43 AM Thank you for reading and commenting. Welcome back, Wilfred.

Jan Allison September 10, 2017 at 12:47 PM Many congratulations Lin I knew it would be a big winner:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane September 15, 2017 at 9:42 AM Thank you so much, Jan.

Seren Roberts September 10, 2017 at 4:18 AM Congratulations Lin....Seren Lin Lane September 15, 2017 at 9:42 AM Thanks and the congratulations are coming your way as well.

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 9, 2017 at 11:28 PM Congratulation on your well deserved win, Lin. Lin Lane September 15, 2017 at 9:42 AM Thank you, Subimal.

Connie Marcum Wong September 9, 2017 at 4:50 PM I love this Lin! Big congratulations on your first placement! : ) Lin Lane September 15, 2017 at 9:42 AM Thanks ever so much, Connie.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2017 at 1:56 PM - Congratulations on your beautiful 1st place, Lin :) - (Hope all is well with your family ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Lin Lane September 15, 2017 at 9:41 AM All is well with my family. Irma didn't do much damage to them. Thanks for asking and for the comments, Anne-Lise.

Charlie Smith September 9, 2017 at 10:28 AM Back to pat your back, congratulations Dear Lady... Lin Lane September 15, 2017 at 9:41 AM I'll take the pat and give you a hug, Charlie. Thank you.

Dale Gregory Cozart September 9, 2017 at 8:39 AM Congrats on your win, Lin! Lin Lane September 15, 2017 at 9:40 AM Thanks a lot, Dale.

Winged Warrior September 9, 2017 at 8:22 AM Back to Congrats!!!...yahoo!!! Lin Lane September 15, 2017 at 9:40 AM Thank you kindly, WW.

Gregory Richard Barden September 9, 2017 at 8:13 AM This is gorgeous, Lin, I just adore it ... blessings and congrats on your win! I'm fav-ing this! <3 Lin Lane September 15, 2017 at 9:40 AM Thanks for the wonderful remarks and the faving, Greg.

Heidi Sands September 9, 2017 at 6:44 AM Congratulations Lin :) Lin Lane September 15, 2017 at 9:39 AM Thanks, Heidi.

John Michaels September 9, 2017 at 5:49 AM Lovely write, Lin... and a great title! Congratulations on your First Place win! The influence of the moon on the tides reminds me of a Haiku I wrote a few years ago (Gravity); you may like it. All the best, John. Lin Lane September 15, 2017 at 9:39 AM Thank you ever so much, John.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2017 at 5:20 AM - Oh, this was beautiful - A winning poem, Lin - GL !!! - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Lin Lane September 8, 2017 at 2:14 PM It makes me happy that you think it's beautiful. Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Frederic Parker September 7, 2017 at 6:38 PM As someone whose lives near the ocean, you have captured it well... good luck Lin Lane September 8, 2017 at 2:13 PM Thanks ever so much, Frederic.

Charlie Smith September 7, 2017 at 1:21 PM Wonderful Sedoka Lin, best wishes in the contest... Lin Lane September 8, 2017 at 2:13 PM Thanks for the well wishes, Charlie.

Tim Smith September 7, 2017 at 1:06 PM A delightful vision. Lin Lane September 8, 2017 at 2:13 PM Thanks very much, Tim.

Jan Allison September 7, 2017 at 12:47 PM Wow Lin I am in awe of your amazing imagery this is so so beautiful I think know Russell will love it:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane September 7, 2017 at 12:51 PM Thanks oodles, Jan.

Winged Warrior September 7, 2017 at 11:25 AM Russell will be delighted...a radiant verse my friend...best wishes...^WW^ Lin Lane September 7, 2017 at 12:50 PM Thanks very much.