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Dazzling is moonlight transcending glimmering stars Ornament hung in night's sky Lustrous orb that rules ebb and flow of ocean tides Radiance glows o'er lovers 9/7/2017 Moonlight Delight contest hosted by: Russell Sivey

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Date: 11/5/2017 12:16:00 PM
Great Sedoka with some lovely imagery. Congratulations on your win, Lin! Kind regards, John.
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Date: 9/11/2017 8:36:00 AM
Nice to read this on my day back..... lovely
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:43:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting. Welcome back, Wilfred.
Date: 9/10/2017 12:47:00 PM
Many congratulations Lin I knew it would be a big winner:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:42:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jan.
Date: 9/10/2017 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations Lin....Seren
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:42:00 AM
Thanks and the congratulations are coming your way as well.
Date: 9/9/2017 11:28:00 PM
Congratulation on your well deserved win, Lin.
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:42:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal.
Date: 9/9/2017 4:50:00 PM
I love this Lin! Big congratulations on your first placement! : )
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:42:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Connie.
Date: 9/9/2017 1:56:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful 1st place, Lin :) - (Hope all is well with your family ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:41:00 AM
All is well with my family. Irma didn't do much damage to them. Thanks for asking and for the comments, Anne-Lise.
Date: 9/9/2017 10:28:00 AM
Back to pat your back, congratulations Dear Lady...
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:41:00 AM
I'll take the pat and give you a hug, Charlie. Thank you.
Date: 9/9/2017 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Lin!
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:40:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Dale.
Date: 9/9/2017 8:22:00 AM
Back to Congrats!!!...yahoo!!!
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:40:00 AM
Thank you kindly, WW.
Date: 9/9/2017 8:13:00 AM
This is gorgeous, Lin, I just adore it ... blessings and congrats on your win! I'm fav-ing this! <3
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:40:00 AM
Thanks for the wonderful remarks and the faving, Greg.
Date: 9/9/2017 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations Lin :)
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:39:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi.
Date: 9/9/2017 5:49:00 AM
Lovely write, Lin... and a great title! Congratulations on your First Place win! The influence of the moon on the tides reminds me of a Haiku I wrote a few years ago (Gravity); you may like it. All the best, John.
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:39:00 AM
Thank you ever so much, John.
Date: 9/8/2017 11:17:00 PM
Makes me wish to be near the sea, beautiful Lin!
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:39:00 AM
Thanks very much, Art.
Date: 9/8/2017 5:20:00 AM
- Oh, this was beautiful - A winning poem, Lin - GL !!! - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/8/2017 2:14:00 PM
It makes me happy that you think it's beautiful. Thank you, Anne-Lise.
Date: 9/7/2017 6:38:00 PM
As someone whose lives near the ocean, you have captured it well... good luck
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Date: 9/8/2017 2:13:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, Frederic.
Date: 9/7/2017 1:21:00 PM
Wonderful Sedoka Lin, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 9/8/2017 2:13:00 PM
Thanks for the well wishes, Charlie.
Date: 9/7/2017 1:06:00 PM
A delightful vision.
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Date: 9/8/2017 2:13:00 PM
Thanks very much, Tim.
Date: 9/7/2017 12:47:00 PM
Wow Lin I am in awe of your amazing imagery this is so so beautiful I think know Russell will love it:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/7/2017 12:51:00 PM
Thanks oodles, Jan.
Date: 9/7/2017 11:25:00 AM
Russell will be delighted...a radiant verse my friend...best wishes...^WW^
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Date: 9/7/2017 12:50:00 PM
Thanks very much.

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