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Aglow

The patchwork fields go on and on Aglow with roses and green lawn See upward glance of stars in sky Angelic light of ranch predawn Aglow with roses and green lawn Shower of dew and sun advance Angelic light of ranch predawn As chiffon flowers glow and dance Shower of dew and sun advance See upward glance of stars in sky As chiffon flowers glow and dance The patchwork fields go on and on

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Date: 2/6/2025 8:11:00 PM
I always like your language, Kim - how you say things, so beautiful
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2025 3:40:00 AM
Thank you, Paige, You encourage me!
Date: 1/29/2025 2:25:00 AM
- What a beautiful place, Kim ...I close my eyes and enjoy it :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2025 1:41:00 PM
That means so much to me, Anne-Lise!
Date: 1/28/2025 11:20:00 PM
Nice one, Kim. I like your repeat lines. Your work seems seamless. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2025 1:41:00 PM
I appreciate you! Your support is always encouraging :)
Date: 1/28/2025 8:47:00 PM
A rural landscape in the early morning light,dreamlike ethereal atmosphere capturing the transition from night to dawn.Very nice.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2025 1:40:00 PM
Thank you, Akham!
Date: 1/28/2025 1:25:00 PM
Aww just beautiful Kim….wonderful imagery! Debx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2025 3:15:00 PM
Thank you, Deb!
Date: 1/28/2025 4:22:00 AM
Brilliant! Your amazing poetry will go on and on. Another FAV!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2025 9:40:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Joe! I appreciate you!
Date: 1/27/2025 9:13:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in a challenging form! Great job Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2025 9:40:00 AM
Thank you, Karen!

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