Kim Rodrigues Poet Pantoum

Aglow

 The patchwork fields go on and on
Aglow with roses and green lawn
See upward glance of stars in sky
Angelic light of ranch predawn

Aglow with roses and green lawn
Shower of dew and sun advance
Angelic light of ranch predawn
As chiffon flowers glow and dance

Shower of dew and sun advance
See upward glance of stars in sky
As chiffon flowers glow and dance
The patchwork fields go on and on

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Paige Hind February 6, 2025 at 8:11 PM I always like your language, Kim - how you say things, so beautiful Kim Rodrigues February 7, 2025 at 3:40 AM Thank you, Paige, You encourage me!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2025 at 2:25 AM - What a beautiful place, Kim ...I close my eyes and enjoy it :) - hugs Kim Rodrigues January 29, 2025 at 1:41 PM That means so much to me, Anne-Lise!

Sara Kendrick January 28, 2025 at 11:20 PM Nice one, Kim. I like your repeat lines. Your work seems seamless. Sara K Kim Rodrigues January 29, 2025 at 1:41 PM I appreciate you! Your support is always encouraging :)

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh January 28, 2025 at 8:47 PM A rural landscape in the early morning light,dreamlike ethereal atmosphere capturing the transition from night to dawn.Very nice. Kim Rodrigues January 29, 2025 at 1:40 PM Thank you, Akham!

Deb M January 28, 2025 at 1:25 PM Aww just beautiful Kim….wonderful imagery! Debx Kim Rodrigues January 28, 2025 at 3:15 PM Thank you, Deb!

Joseph P. DiMino January 28, 2025 at 4:22 AM Brilliant! Your amazing poetry will go on and on. Another FAV! Kim Rodrigues January 28, 2025 at 9:40 AM Thank you kindly, Joe! I appreciate you!

Karen Jones January 27, 2025 at 9:13 PM Beautiful imagery in a challenging form! Great job Kim! Kim Rodrigues January 28, 2025 at 9:40 AM Thank you, Karen!