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Aging Heart

prevailing unrest face buried in a wet pillow sounds of coughing pain 8/22/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/1/2018 8:16:00 PM
Such sadness yet completion in so few words...
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Date: 8/24/2018 4:10:00 AM
Horribly sad, powerfully written!!
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Date: 8/23/2018 9:12:00 AM
This is a sad reality. Well written Eve. :)
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Date: 8/23/2018 8:57:00 AM
It's a sad fact of aging for many. Well expressed,Eve.
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Date: 8/23/2018 7:58:00 AM
Aging's not easy or fun; that cough...oh yeah it's exactly the way you've penned; Well done.
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Date: 8/23/2018 7:19:00 AM
This one hurts to read. Great expression of feelings and emotion.
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Date: 8/23/2018 1:48:00 AM
This brings a tear to my eye Eve, hope you are ok!
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