Aging Dis-Gracefully - Revised

Today when passing my mirror on by
I saw an image that filled me with fright
'Twas mother looking me straight in the eye —
Wrinkles, grey hair (on my face in this light!)

Seeing I'd aged to such a degree,
I then sought to examine further down.
I saw not my housecoat hitting my knee,
But a boob hanging the length of my gown.

Teary at this unyielding decay
I threw my arms up in resigned acceptance.
THAT’S when my arm skin started to play
Clapping together like an Irish step dance.

And as if to punctuate my despair
My children joined in this unfriendly game.
They pointed out my age-spotted hands (no fair!)
And their grandma’s were one and the same!

I smiled to keep me from giving up
And noticed I'd left my teeth out in their cup.

Revised September 22, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 2:27 PM
Creative way to go with this contest idea..I enjoyed reading your work..Good idea to get some hair dye bought ahead so that the shade will remain the same..LOL..Thanks for participating in my contest..Congrats on your win..Sara
Arnone Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 7:49 PM
Silly and quite enjoyable, aged sonnet. Congrats! ;-)
Rockwell Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 9:10 PM
Thank you!
Nance Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 10:20 PM
an enjoyable write, humor at the aging process, well done.
Rockwell Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 10:33 PM
Thank you.
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