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Aging Bundles of Debris

at seven
locked in a cold cellar
where bulbs hang to dry
in damp darkness of night

sleds posed for winter play
near steep piles of wood,
one on top of one

tin buckets filled with sand
a graveyard for mice
who crept into a wooden trap

garden gloves stiff
yellow paint dry
metal cans left open

newspapers cover a wooden door
near an oval window
up three steps to the outside

a door nailed shut
where little, little feet
feel loose cement

seven
spider webs hang 
far above my head

I see it now...
I feel it now...
as if someone locked

me into the cellar
at seven, a hideout
below reality

still smell dampness
feel the cold, see colors...
all senses clear
not that I am blind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/20/2010 8:30:00 PM
Very good,a lot of detail,thanx!
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Date: 3/20/2010 2:34:00 PM
CELLARS CAN BE CREEPY--U DESCRIBED IT WELL. WEELCOME TO POETRY SOUP--I DESCIDED THE LARGE LETTERS MAKES IT EASIER TO SEE, DON'T MEAN TO YELL AT YOU. HOPE YOU ARE ENJOYING THE SOUP AND HAVE MUCH INSPIRATION HERE.
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Date: 3/20/2010 7:22:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Nancy. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2010 8:52:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all.. as this delight tonight... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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