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Ages Past

...inspired by 'October Tune' by Joseph Brodsky A shelf reveals sepia-toned pictures, floorboards groan with memories of ages past and old men creaking, shadows flicker lightly on the wall. Hours flow as lava creeps, and scattered letters lie forgotten, dust motes float, their orbits spinning, shifted by the ghosts of yesteryear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/27/2016 6:19:00 PM
i have such a vivid picture of this room, keith. i especially love the last 2 lines...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/27/2016 6:36:00 PM
Shortish I know, but I didn't want it any longer. Thanks for liking the last two lines... they're my favourites too! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/27/2016 4:57:00 PM
excellent write Keith...nice imagery, though it looks dry...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/27/2016 6:37:00 PM
It's supposed to be dry! Thanks so much WS. Best wishes, Keith

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