age is over-rated

Age is over rated
I went from cute and cuddly
To terribly two
In the flip of a calendar
From being inquisitive
To being nosey
From pre-teen
To A TEENAGER
Meandered
Through the military
Into construction
And against the Vegas spread
Married
And became a father
AGE
That sly bastard
Has made me
A grandfather
And a great grandfather
I have taught them all
To spit, to curse, 
To love
Even the seemingly
Un-lovable
Age has slowed me down
Stolen my fastball
It has not been able
To wither my wit
Stifle my laughter
Or contain my enthusiasm
I still laugh
Too loud and too often
Too frequently at the “wrong” things
The children and grandchildren
Share their “Papa stories”
Most include mud puddles
A few scars from the jungle bars
H U G E….ice cream sundaes
Getting hit by a baseball
He threw to show you
It wouldn’t hurt that much
To get hit by the pitch
I may be getting “old”
But age had better be ready
When I round third
Headed for home
He’d better be holding the ball
With both hands
Cuz there will be
A collision
Before I’m
Called… “OUT”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 8:40 PM
Aw, this should POTD if not POAL, Poem of a Lifetime -- which it already is, John. A classic! Straight into my FAVES. Thanks, Gershon
Bauer Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 2:29 PM
Wow! A wonderful description of aging and such a touching peek into your relationship with your grandkids. I love the way you’ve ended this, too - a little feistiness (and humor) is what we need at this point in our lives…
M  Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 1:26 PM
Brilliant John…..a wonderful reflective write on ageing and the beauty in life! Debx
Rodgers Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 12:18 PM
Hello John, your reflection on age is a celebration of a life fully lived, marked by moments of joy, laughter, and love. From cute and cuddly beginnings to the wisdom of grandfatherhood, your journey embodies resilience and vitality. Age may slow us down physically, but it can never dim the brightness of our spirit or the depth of our laughter. Your zest for life shines through in every word. Keep rounding those bases, John, and never stop swinging for the fences. Blessings, Daniel.
Achara Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 10:14 AM
As an elder person, I can relate to you poem. In fact, I did not realize I was part of anyone's growing up memories until my 35 year old niece shared a memory she had that included me. Made me cry, do did your poem!
Lane Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 6:40 AM
John, I had no clue how emotional your lines would have me feeling by the time you were taking a lead off third base. This is one of my favorites of yours ever posted. It captures many sides of John Lawless, and I love all of them. Hugs and a fave from me on this one! You stay away from home plate for many more years because PS wouldn't be the same without you.
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