Age Is More Than a Number

A septuaginarian?! -- He doesn't look a day over 45  
  ~ But he's wracked with pain
  
He hasn't changed a bit since we were in college 
  ~ So what? His feet are on fire 24/7

Look! He has a full head of dark brown hair
  ~ Yeah, and he can't walk from here to the end of the block

But he's so well preserved for his age
  ~ Ha! Have you seen him try to navigate stairs?

I'll bet he still fits into his graduation suit
  ~ He sure does: Osteoporosis has hollowed out his bones 

You know, they say that you're only as old as you feel
  ~ That's true: He's old, he feels...

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Date: 2/9/2019 6:31:00 PM
Thank you for writing an honest poem! Love the title.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/9/2019 8:35:00 PM
Wow! I just LOVE your comment, Sunlite, i.e., 'an honest poem.' It speaks volumes, and it's perhaps the biggest compliment I've ever received on the Soup. Deeply appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 2/3/2019 9:53:00 AM
You are right Gershon... we get wiser by age, well most of us... lol
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/3/2019 1:00:00 PM
Ha, ha. I agree, Silent...at least wise enough to know not to overdo it, physically---whatever that 'it' may entail. :) gw
Date: 2/3/2019 6:05:00 AM
I agree, age is more than a number. A person may look young but how they feel on the inside is another story:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/3/2019 12:58:00 PM
Absolutely correct---and thank goodness it works the other way too!! :) gw
Date: 2/3/2019 12:37:00 AM
Yep only as old as you feel... That guy was having a good laugh. My father-in-law said though, "Well, I can tell you one thing...It's not gonna get any better." ;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/3/2019 12:58:00 PM
And, boy, is your father-in-law every right!! :) gw
Date: 2/2/2019 11:03:00 PM
"feet are on fire 24/7" got me. If I wear the wrong shoes, I will take a step and it feels like I have broken my ankle, sometimes both of them. Arthritis from so many destructive things I have done to myself. I have to laugh at this poem, my friend, because it is so applicable!
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Date: 2/2/2019 11:19:00 PM
Glad you can laugh at it -- as opposed to the alternative. :) gw
Date: 2/2/2019 11:01:00 PM
My husband is having a lot of bad back pain now, so I do sympathize, you describe it so eloquently-
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/2/2019 11:18:00 PM
Experience is the best teacher, I'm afraid...
Date: 2/2/2019 9:16:00 PM
Oh my goodness Gershon, you have given me another prospective in relation to age. Guess some people get older, others grow older.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/2/2019 11:18:00 PM
It's a 'get and grow' thing, alrighty.
Date: 2/2/2019 8:05:00 PM
I giggle in empathy ;o) xomo
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Date: 2/2/2019 11:17:00 PM
Happy to year that you can giggle, and in empathy (as opposed to identification!). :) gw
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