Against the Sky

Against the azure sky so bright
   she flutters by,
      with grace on high
   in ever random flowing flight.

This lovely butterfly behold
   in orange and black,
      no beauty lack;
   ‘tis nature’s gift to man all told.

She flits through garden flowers hued,
   from coral bells 
      to daisy shells,
   to sip sweet nectar, natures food.
   
I gaze at beauty from afar;
   she flutters free,
      cannot she see
   the one who thinks she is a star.
  
I’ve watched her all these many years,
   and seen her bloom
      from her cocoon;
   a father proud who stands and cheers

as daughter spreads her wings in flight.
   With grace on high,
      she flutters by
   against the azure sky so bright.



September 3, 2018
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La France Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 3:06 PM
John, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent write, well done ~
Gondolf Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 3:58 PM
Thank you Dear Heart, I'm glad you liked my poem. And than you for hosting, Constance. John
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 6:26 PM
Such a lovely metaphor to use as a beautiful tribute to your daughter, John. Beautifully written, and congratulations on your podium win! Sandra :)
Gondolf Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 8:11 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John
Kitchin Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 5:26 AM
Beautiful imagery, congratulations on your win!
Gondolf Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 6:08 AM
Thank you, Tania, I appreciate it. John
Nicole Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 10:56 PM
Congratulations John, on this win. :) My heart is smiling. ~ Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 6:07 AM
Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate your support. John
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 9:11 PM
John, your entry is a fave for me and I am happy for your top win! Congratulations John! : )
Gondolf Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 9:51 PM
Thank you so much, Connie, I appreciate your comments and support. And thank you for the fav. All the best. John
Ashley Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 7:57 PM
Your poem is so very lovely and enchanting, John. Beautiful in every way. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your exquisite dedication to your daughter. ~Susan
Gondolf Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 9:38 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, I appreciate your comments and support. Best wishes. John
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 6:55 PM
Lovely poetry, John. Congrats on your win.
Gondolf Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thank you, Line, I appreciate it. John
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September 4, 2018 at 1:37 PM
Gorgeous poem John, your love resonates in every word. My best to you in the contest! xomo
Gondolf Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen, appreciate it. John
Sergi Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 6:29 PM
You have epitomized the beauty of a butterfly in all it's glory. My compliments!
Gondolf Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Thanks, Ralph, I appreciate it. John
Nicole Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 4:23 PM
She is that beautiful butterfly. :) What a lovely dedication to your daughter. Beauty is on the inside, and lingers outside. May the wind always grace her wings. Your thoughts make my heart smile. : ) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 4:45 PM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, Brandy, I appreciate you and the support you show. Your beautiful thoughts always make my heart smile. John
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