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Against the Sky

Against the azure sky so bright she flutters by, with grace on high in ever random flowing flight. This lovely butterfly behold in orange and black, no beauty lack; ‘tis nature’s gift to man all told. She flits through garden flowers hued, from coral bells to daisy shells, to sip sweet nectar, natures food. I gaze at beauty from afar; she flutters free, cannot she see the one who thinks she is a star. I’ve watched her all these many years, and seen her bloom from her cocoon; a father proud who stands and cheers as daughter spreads her wings in flight. With grace on high, she flutters by against the azure sky so bright. September 3, 2018 Contest: Enclosed Rhyme - September, 2018 Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 10/2/2018 3:06:00 PM
John, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent write, well done ~
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/2/2018 3:58:00 PM
Thank you Dear Heart, I'm glad you liked my poem. And than you for hosting, Constance. John
Date: 10/2/2018 12:21:00 PM
A beautiful poem, about something beautiful. With love and pride. Congratulations on your win, John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/2/2018 12:32:00 PM
Hi Sandy, thank you so much for your comments and support. John
Date: 10/1/2018 6:26:00 PM
Such a lovely metaphor to use as a beautiful tribute to your daughter, John. Beautifully written, and congratulations on your podium win! Sandra :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/1/2018 8:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John
Date: 9/30/2018 5:26:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, congratulations on your win!
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/30/2018 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, Tania, I appreciate it. John
Date: 9/29/2018 10:56:00 PM
Congratulations John, on this win. :) My heart is smiling. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/30/2018 6:07:00 AM
Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate your support. John
Date: 9/29/2018 9:11:00 PM
John, your entry is a fave for me and I am happy for your top win! Congratulations John! : )
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/29/2018 9:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie, I appreciate your comments and support. And thank you for the fav. All the best. John
Date: 9/29/2018 7:57:00 PM
Your poem is so very lovely and enchanting, John. Beautiful in every way. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your exquisite dedication to your daughter. ~Susan
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/29/2018 9:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, I appreciate your comments and support. Best wishes. John
Date: 9/29/2018 6:55:00 PM
Lovely poetry, John. Congrats on your win.
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/29/2018 7:01:00 PM
Thank you, Line, I appreciate it. John
Date: 9/4/2018 1:37:00 PM
Gorgeous poem John, your love resonates in every word. My best to you in the contest! xomo
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/4/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen, appreciate it. John
Date: 9/3/2018 6:29:00 PM
You have epitomized the beauty of a butterfly in all it's glory. My compliments!
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/3/2018 6:50:00 PM
Thanks, Ralph, I appreciate it. John
Date: 9/3/2018 4:23:00 PM
She is that beautiful butterfly. :) What a lovely dedication to your daughter. Beauty is on the inside, and lingers outside. May the wind always grace her wings. Your thoughts make my heart smile. : ) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/3/2018 4:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, Brandy, I appreciate you and the support you show. Your beautiful thoughts always make my heart smile. John

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