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Against the Panes

it's somber this evening this rain falls fast and hard echoing like your words against the panes of my soul i struggle to breathe with this weight upon my chest as it suffocates me i feel lost somewhere between this darkness and my dreams hopelessly trying to find my way back sleep doesn't come within a mind that's tossed about in the depths of thought wondering what caused this storm as it looms over me drowning me in the tears as they fall grounded on this pillow more steadily then the beat of my own heart

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Date: 1/17/2020 5:13:00 AM
Your creativity is overshadowed only by your empathetic empathy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/17/2020 10:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren :) hugs
Date: 1/15/2020 12:37:00 PM
You use such strong metaphors Sandy, that the reader is drawn in and feel the impact of the write every time!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 7:27:00 PM
Thank you so much John...glad i have that effect with my words...i love when poems grab me and pull me in :) hugs
Date: 1/15/2020 9:07:00 AM
Its amazing as to how much devastation careless words can create...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 10:29:00 AM
for sure Robert... one of the three things in life you can never recovered are words once spoken...Thank you for your visits and comments :)
Date: 1/15/2020 7:05:00 AM
It seems sadness is in the air this morning. Your poem, though sad, is beautiful. Your words touch me deeply and cause an ache that seems unending, but that is just one more testament to your talent.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 10:27:00 AM
I just read your poems so i see what you mean by your comment... must be the rainy winter weather...we all need more sunshine, thank you Chris for your kind words this morning!
Date: 1/15/2020 3:29:00 AM
Wow Sandy, what a terrific poem - you certainly have a unique way of writing poetry. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 10:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Jennifer,,, your comments always bring me smiles.... hugs and blessings...

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