Against An Inky Night

Meandering through an old woodland I pause against an inky night. But how hard to speak about emptiness when voices enter my breath to hiss of past stories... Although coarse leaves form a debris Like fractured thoughts that wilt away; I lean on a barren oak tree Restraining words from ghostly play... earth holds me in grief tangled with moss and nettles while echoes return ...louder than nightingale’s cry in trembles of death’s farewell 8/17/2016 Broken Wing’s It Takes Four Contest
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Date: 8/25/2016 1:48:00 PM
Nette, you have woven these four forms into a seamless garment. A well deserved high placement
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Date: 8/24/2016 3:58:00 PM
A beautiful, descriptive write, Nette! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings!
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Date: 8/23/2016 6:31:00 PM
Dramatic dark and deep Nette! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/23/2016 5:04:00 PM
Nette, this is a beautiful and dramatic piece! Congrats on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 8/23/2016 10:33:00 AM
Enjoyed reading, Nett, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/22/2016 12:56:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem ~
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Date: 8/22/2016 12:16:00 PM
Nette, so beautiful sweet lady....congrats on your well deserved top placement :)-luloo
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Date: 8/22/2016 12:15:00 PM
Very well written, congratulations Nette...
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Date: 8/22/2016 8:26:00 AM
Congrats for taking the challenge with this contest and for the win! :) Sunita
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Date: 8/21/2016 11:33:00 PM
Hi Nette, You have penned a well written piece. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/17/2016 2:01:00 AM
Well done! flowed so beautifully, enjoyed the poem. Kind regards, Craig
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Date: 8/16/2016 5:05:00 PM
Well written Nette...best wishes
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Date: 8/16/2016 3:22:00 PM
Another beauty of a poem, Nette. Loved it!
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Date: 8/16/2016 2:03:00 PM
I see such nostalgia in your impeccable poem. Somberly deep I must mark this one!
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Date: 8/16/2016 1:56:00 PM
- A deep and touching poems, Nette - Best wishes in the contest and warm hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2016 1:36:00 PM
An unusually dark write from you today, nette. Reminds me of an upcoming Halloween.Good luck in contest!
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Date: 8/16/2016 1:09:00 PM
Impeccable poem lined with deep emotion and penned with sensitivity. You always flow!
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Date: 8/16/2016 12:48:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very poetic lines..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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