Against An Inky Night

Meandering through an old woodland I pause against an inky night. But how hard to speak about emptiness when voices enter my breath to hiss of past stories... Although coarse leaves form a debris Like fractured thoughts that wilt away; I lean on a barren oak tree Restraining words from ghostly play... earth holds me in grief tangled with moss and nettles while echoes return ...louder than nightingale’s cry in trembles of death’s farewell 8/17/2016 Broken Wing’s It Takes Four Contest
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Lawless Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 1:48 PM
Nette, you have woven these four forms into a seamless garment. A well deserved high placement
Merryman Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 3:58 PM
A beautiful, descriptive write, Nette! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings!
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Dramatic dark and deep Nette! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 5:04 PM
Nette, this is a beautiful and dramatic piece! Congrats on your well-deserved win. Janice
Roper Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Enjoyed reading, Nett, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 12:56 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem ~
Scars Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Nette, so beautiful sweet lady....congrats on your well deserved top placement :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Very well written, congratulations Nette...
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August 22, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Congrats for taking the challenge with this contest and for the win! :) Sunita
Y. Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 11:33 PM
Hi Nette, You have penned a well written piece. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Emu Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 2:01 AM
Well done! flowed so beautifully, enjoyed the poem. Kind regards, Craig
May Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 5:05 PM
Well written Nette...best wishes
Leiser Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Another beauty of a poem, Nette. Loved it!
Sabre Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 2:03 PM
I see such nostalgia in your impeccable poem. Somberly deep I must mark this one!
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 1:56 PM
- A deep and touching poems, Nette - Best wishes in the contest and warm hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 1:36 PM
An unusually dark write from you today, nette. Reminds me of an upcoming Halloween.Good luck in contest!
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 12:48 PM
Enjoyed reading your very poetic lines..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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