Again, Broken

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Wow ... Please forgive me ... Another exquisite creation A piece of my soul laid bone-bare Lost to the abyss of perspective A sea of glaring cliche' And mediocrity Just. Wow.

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 1/1/2020 4:01:00 PM

Wow, just Brilliant . . . ; )

FJ Thomas

Date: 1/1/2020 12:23:00 PM

Well there is no mediocrity here so tell them buzz off! Hello Gregory ;)

John Hamilton

Date: 12/25/2019 10:33:00 AM

Funny how the sea of mediocrity, sends waves and waves of criticism, small minded jealousy blinds them to the real truth, what is great poetry is right in front of them but they are blind! So much said in so few words!

John Hamilton

Date: 12/25/2019 10:33:00 AM

I just got the sarcasm of this...hilarious!