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Craig Cornish's Ceraunophilia Contest...17 Jul 26

Aftertaste Of Evening

Somewhere along waxed moonglow,
he drifts like a sweet aftertaste 
on my lips...those warm fingers teasing
 my frail wantoness
that even the pale moaning of his flame
becomes a thunder in itself.

And what is compelling about the musk
of this star is how one gaze can enter into
my universe fondling hidden caves
when he heaves gentle gentle love;
raw as touches unbuttoning my cellar:

A hundred whispers drape mounds
of my peak that burns in oil
and I succumb, we entwine... so delirious
 into the lucent, stormy beams of his arms.

Till the falling of evening, when again
he strokes  laughter on my hair
to linger on my trails undressing 
my skin with songs of flowers --
while the malleable lightning in his irises
becomes utterly silent...tame.
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Kauffman Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 5:00 PM
What a wonderful, passionate take on the theme as you explore the thunder and lightning of love and your lover. Congratulations on your winning placement, Nette. I always love the electricity your words excite! Blessings.
Hind Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 9:31 PM
ah, so romantic :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 9:29 PM
Wow. Sensual. Romantic beautiful. I could not even begin to understand the contest prompt let alone come up with such a gem as this,!
Smith  Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 1:01 AM
Wonderfully worded.
Greece Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 12:52 AM
Earthy and divine, your impassioned poem has both of them
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 4:27 PM
Creative sort of seductive work. Way to go. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 3:58 PM
Exceptional writing, effortless apt imagery, focussed narrative so convincing. It has the lyrical touch
Jones Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 3:31 PM
Wow! Very sensual and creative! Good job putting this together Nette. Best wishes.
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