Afternoon Woolgathering

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On lazy uneventful afternoons
     I sometimes venture into the quiet haven
        that is my occupied mind as if a voice 
        in the wilderness beckoned me there. 
          It's always my favorite place to go...

         on a day in disarray to contemplate 
      and expunge impurities that swirl inside 
  my head. I would sit beneath a tree as I trap
           myself in the undertow of reverie, 
    submerging in the depth of serene solitude. 

      I go woolgathering on certain afternoons
       in the meadow of my mind, listening to
         the wondrous cacophonies of nature. 
        How delightful the mellifluous sounds 
      of chirping birds? The rustling of leaves? 

        Myriad of memories I long laid to bed 
 would spring awake as soon as I close my eyes 
     My thoughts would swing like a pendulum 
            between the past and the future. 
     It's amazing how much the mind can hold! 

 A miscellany of thoughts would continue to rage 
   as I linger there lost in the arresting scenery, 
 taking in the invigorating zephyr; how it soothes
       my skin! It's the most beautiful escape 
            from the chaotic here and now

              On lazy uneventful afternoons
        I oftentimes linger there in meditation, 
     reluctant to leave such a peaceful oblivion, 
      but I must. I always do with bright smile
    as I open my eyes again to a peaceful world. 


Date written: 07/11/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/15/2022 10:15:00 AM
What a dreamy place for your "myriad" of reflective meditations Edward. So wonderful to walk back in time with you and see the seeds of your talent sprout! Congratulations on your win. Blessings to you my friend!
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Date: 3/12/2022 9:04:00 AM
"Myriad of memories I long laid to bed " - Whole work is beautiful. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/12/2022 12:14:00 PM
Thank you for the visit and congrats, Christuraj:-)
Date: 3/12/2022 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A peaceful write/picture. "I love your line, "It's amazing how much the mind can hold!" So very true. Today, be blessed with your win....................
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/12/2022 12:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paula:-) Blessings to you.
Date: 3/12/2022 3:24:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this along with the photo (that is alive). God bless you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/12/2022 12:12:00 PM
Thank you very much, Beata:-)
Date: 3/12/2022 1:50:00 AM
What a sensitive and apt description to the subliminal nature of poets in their exquisite appreciation and love. Magical! Woolgatherers indeed. Lonna
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/12/2022 12:11:00 PM
Thank you very much for the feedback and visit, Lonna:-)
Date: 3/23/2021 11:32:00 PM
Edward, your poem is beautiful and dreamy, congratulations on having it selected as a Featured poem on the Homepage this week _Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/24/2021 4:37:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 3/23/2021 9:29:00 PM
This is so soothing and descriptive at the same time, Edward. At last I found it. Truly a lovely poem, my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/24/2021 4:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea:-) I appreciate it.
Date: 3/23/2021 7:28:00 AM
A well written verse Edward, you take the reader on a journey to that tranquil place in your mind where all your earthly worries are forgotten. Tom
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/23/2021 1:12:00 PM
Thank you very much, Tom:-) Most appreciated!
Date: 3/23/2021 6:52:00 AM
Hi Edward This is a lovely poem that has helped focus my own thoughts and redirect them to a better place today :) I love the image/gif too. Cheers - Gary
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/23/2021 6:56:00 AM
Thank you very much for the feedback and visit, Gary:-) Glad you found it influential!
Date: 3/23/2021 2:53:00 AM
A gorgeous poem Ed, love the imagery and the peaceful feeling it evokes!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/23/2021 3:57:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful feedback, Tania:-)
Date: 3/22/2021 7:42:00 PM
That’s beautiful Edward, there comes a time we need to escape to a quiet haven, especially when we’re heavy laden and in need of rest. Belle
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Date: 3/22/2021 8:37:00 PM
Thank you so much for the visit and comment, Belle:-) Glad you liked it!
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