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Afternoon Whisperings (Double Etheree)

AFTERNOON WHISPERINGS (double Etheree) Woods Deep dark But just see An open spot A verdant clearing Where I spread my blanket Run my hands through wild clover Settle down my head in the clouds Billowing but sparse and distant A rustle in the forest brings me round Sun Through trees Warm drifting Just sniff the air Sense the tiny flakes Particles are unseen Except in afternoon sun That thing of mind goes whispering Breathing summer secrets in my ear “You are never alone never alone”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/5/2010 8:07:00 PM
back again hope it is not annoying, I just posted my first Etheree, hope you take a bit of time to comment on my job. I enjoyed doing both. Have nice one,..p..d
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:47:00 PM
Lovely on both of them, still enjoying my reads on my little project, i think i am starting to see the form, nicely done,..p.d.
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Date: 4/1/2010 5:09:00 PM
So So beautiful dear friend..Charma
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Date: 4/1/2010 12:30:00 PM
YOu did GREAT with this one, Daver. Did you know i love etheree so much, I even did a book called For the Love of Etheree. You do the form justice with these find samplings of it! What is this "Thing" you are talking about doing with short forms? Is it this form, etheree? Luv, andrea
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Date: 4/1/2010 11:33:00 AM
Wow! The etheree form is challening in single stanza and here you have created to that work well together. Good use of imagery. I like the title. Keep up the good writing. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen
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Date: 4/1/2010 10:43:00 AM
very visual, I like this
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