Afternoon Doves

Afternoon Doves

I hear you, my little dear singing doves,
You, glaring at me with your soulful eyes,
What are you thinking this late afternoon 
Or what are you selling, what did you buy?

I watched your clan friends with white striped wings,
Nor did they harmonize with bell like tones,
Ah, though, I love you as you cello speak
With muddled and gray colored stricken moans.

You watch the sparrow as if you are God.
As if you are He who gloriously feeds. 
And not those who eat in humility
With sleepy eyes in this late afternoon.

Tired sun makes you shadows until you fly
In the night where perches lie for sweet sleep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 10/22/2019 7:27:00 PM
Hello Sunlite … A nice picture sonnet to highlight a bird of peace. Almost every day I hear the soft cooing of a turtle dove outside my door. Thank you Sunlite - Lindsay
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/23/2019 9:57:00 AM
Thank you, Lindsay. I, too, love their "coo."
Date: 10/15/2019 11:21:00 PM
Love the visual here, one is taken within the poem itself...Great Poetry.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/16/2019 10:17:00 AM
That is a very nice comment, Harry.
Date: 10/14/2019 11:25:00 AM
- Some claim that when doves singing ... then it will rain - A lovely poem, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/16/2019 10:16:00 AM
I love that! We've had a little rain, so maybe that's right.
Date: 10/14/2019 8:13:00 AM
Very sweet my friend...great read...^WW^ :o)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/16/2019 10:15:00 AM
And that's sweet of you, WW.
Date: 10/13/2019 5:09:00 PM
Interesting sonnet.. rhymes are a bit different.. nice read
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/16/2019 10:15:00 AM
Thank you, SO. I agree, don't know how to "fix" them.
Date: 10/13/2019 5:45:00 AM
This is beautiful. I like the line, I love you as you cello speak. That is how the mourning doves sound here. Very nice Sunlite :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/13/2019 4:12:00 PM
I appreciate you noticing the "cello" sound. Thanks, Heidi.
Date: 10/12/2019 8:55:00 PM
This is a wonderful sonnet about one of my favorites. God bless you with much love, Gina
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/13/2019 4:09:00 PM
They are so interesting to watch. Thank you.
Date: 10/12/2019 6:42:00 PM
Nicely written poem. A clear visual picture that grabs the attention of the reader.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/13/2019 4:09:00 PM
Thank you so very much.
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