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Afternoon Afterthoughts

Like a late afternoon afterthought, a sudden, heavy downpour drenches and floods the parched marshland. Here and there, across what once was a mirror lake, wet grasses cast swaying, tapering shadows in the dying light. As the skyline fades into the twilight, exultations throaty and raucous echo from new puddles, fresh waterholes. Shrill jubilations of insects and night birds fill the air, rejoicing over a sense of rebirth in the aftermath of a rainy afterglow! .

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Date: 2/3/2011 4:48:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in your "Afternoon Afterthoughts". Totally enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. Please keep writing, your talent shines. Always, Annalise
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Romeo Naces
Date: 7/7/2019 4:44:00 AM
Thanks, Annalise.
Date: 2/3/2011 1:06:00 PM
Quite expressive and interesting write, romeo
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Date: 2/3/2011 12:04:00 PM
Very nice poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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