Get Your Premium Membership

Aftermath

Her eyes were crystals, with repetitive inner structures and outer sheet faces. They were made of quartz, of almost pure silica. Her smile was a star in the farthest galaxy. It was made of combustions of crimson and wild blue yonder. A star that shines from afar yet already dead a hundred of years ago. Her hands were soft, like they were made of silky fibers with furrows of anhedonia and benumbed stimuli. Her heart wasn't of plain, with etchings nonetheless. Covered with stratums of plasters of a mixture of gypsum with water and sand, thence the width made her blunt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/1/2016 2:40:00 PM
A nice imagery my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Login to Reply
Date: 4/7/2016 8:53:00 PM
this has great imagery. not sure what "she" is but I love reading this.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/7/2016 4:55:00 PM
Hans, this is BEAUTIFUL, I am just loving it 7 ~
Login to Reply
Date: 4/7/2016 3:49:00 PM
Excellent use of unusual words to explain your love interest, Hans! I really enjoyed your unique take on this, a 7!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/7/2016 3:45:00 PM
Very interesting work..I enjoyed reading it today..Creative and unique..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 4/7/2016 12:41:00 PM
Nicely penned HS
Login to Reply
Date: 4/7/2016 11:42:00 AM
Highly descriptive and appealing, Hans. Janice
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs