Sunlite Wanter Poet Rhyme

After Your Loving Visit

After Your Loving Visit

Quiet, so quiet,
Like the inside of a great rock,
Each minute passing by,
You are farther away.

The days of love and lingering,
The kisses, the pleasing, have gone,
Your RPM’s are countless,
You are farther away.

My rooms are shaded by that solar eclipse,
And for me there won’t be another,
Will I see you, hear your kindly voice again?
Quiet, so quiet today.

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Lynn Marie September 16, 2017 at 4:31 AM You write 'quiet' beautifully sunlite. I appreciate the introspective ambiance of your gentle words. thank you xo Sunlite Wanter September 16, 2017 at 11:56 AM What kind comments! Thank you.

Sunlite Wanter September 4, 2017 at 9:38 AM Thank you, Gordon.

Gordon Mcconnell September 3, 2017 at 4:18 PM Lovely little piece Sunlite, well penned and quite reflective look on the visit. Blessings Gordon

Pipping Stars September 2, 2017 at 9:07 PM was your pen whispering this write ... awesome ... Sunlite Wanter September 3, 2017 at 9:55 AM Thank you so much.

White Wolf September 1, 2017 at 6:29 PM And I love the way you write too, my friend! You have heart, which is most important!

Freddie Robinson Jr. August 29, 2017 at 9:07 AM I agree w/Arthur ... such a melancholy poem, Sunlite. Expressed w/such tenderness of yearning however. Transcendent is the sound of silence. An emotionally moving poem. Love and smiles always. Sunlite Wanter August 29, 2017 at 9:46 AM Thank you, Freddie! I was in a melancholy mood when I wrote it.

Anita Harris August 29, 2017 at 5:26 AM The combination of silence and shade is powerful. Sunlite Wanter August 29, 2017 at 9:46 AM Thank you for noticing, Anita! Appreciate your commenting.

Joanna Daniel August 29, 2017 at 1:01 AM Really a quiet poem, Sunlite:) Sunlite Wanter August 29, 2017 at 9:48 AM Thank you, Jo!

Arthur Vaso August 28, 2017 at 8:05 PM Such melancholy, I enjoyed this write! Sunlite Wanter August 29, 2017 at 9:48 AM Sorry about that, Arthur. I was melancholy when I wrote it. Thank you for enjoying it.

Dale Gregory Cozart August 28, 2017 at 2:18 PM Gorgeous. Sunlite Wanter August 29, 2017 at 9:49 AM I really appreciate your comment, Dale.

Tim Smith August 28, 2017 at 1:11 PM Very lovely ...I hear heartbeats Sunlite Wanter August 29, 2017 at 9:50 AM Thank you, Tim!

Vijay Pandit August 28, 2017 at 1:03 PM Feel the quiet in your poem, SW! Well written. Sunlite Wanter August 29, 2017 at 9:50 AM Thank you, Vijay!

Heidi Sands August 28, 2017 at 1:00 PM Very nicely written with expression of such longing Sunlite! Sunlite Wanter August 29, 2017 at 9:50 AM Heidi, I appreciate your support!