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After Your Loving Visit

After Your Loving Visit Quiet, so quiet, Like the inside of a great rock, Each minute passing by, You are farther away. The days of love and lingering, The kisses, the pleasing, have gone, Your RPM’s are countless, You are farther away. My rooms are shaded by that solar eclipse, And for me there won’t be another, Will I see you, hear your kindly voice again? Quiet, so quiet today.

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Lynn Marie

Date: 9/16/2017 4:31:00 AM

You write 'quiet' beautifully sunlite. I appreciate the introspective ambiance of your gentle words. thank you xo

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/16/2017 11:56:00 AM

What kind comments! Thank you.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/4/2017 9:38:00 AM

Thank you, Gordon.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/3/2017 4:18:00 PM

Lovely little piece Sunlite, well penned and quite reflective look on the visit. Blessings Gordon

Pipping Stars

Date: 9/2/2017 9:07:00 PM

was your pen whispering this write ... awesome ...

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/3/2017 9:55:00 AM

Thank you so much.

White Wolf

Date: 9/1/2017 6:29:00 PM

And I love the way you write too, my friend! You have heart, which is most important!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/29/2017 9:07:00 AM

I agree w/Arthur ... such a melancholy poem, Sunlite. Expressed w/such tenderness of yearning however. Transcendent is the sound of silence. An emotionally moving poem. Love and smiles always.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/29/2017 9:46:00 AM

Thank you, Freddie! I was in a melancholy mood when I wrote it.