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after the storm abates

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after the storm the sky sighs relieved the rage has expired with a rolling fade rumble all is quelled to quietude after rain a damp dank shroud covers the earth utterly enveloping everything in slimy glint of wetness after the lightning is sheathed the earth is spared more sharp stabs and brutal bang afterthoughts in rolling peals of thunder then the dark clouds sneak away ashamed for temper tantrums that spoiled what otherwise was a perfect hot summer's day

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Date: 11/13/2024 11:57:00 AM
John, congrats on your win in my contest, like your poem, well done, blessings Constance
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John Anderson
Date: 11/13/2024 1:52:00 PM
Thanks very much.Cheers
Date: 10/13/2024 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your creative winning work. Way to go. Jueju is not an easy form but yours is seamless. Like the temper tantrum part. Thanks for sharing your talent. Sara K
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John Anderson
Date: 10/13/2024 8:57:00 AM
Thanks very much for your kind words. Cheers and Best Wishes
Date: 10/11/2024 10:26:00 PM
Interesting thoughts. Congratulations on your win dear poet.
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Date: 9/27/2024 7:35:00 AM
Love this! Great metaphors and personification!
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John Anderson
Date: 9/27/2024 9:34:00 AM
Thanks very much for your kind words. Cheers and Best Wsihes

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