After the Storm

Savage whims of winter
          that bring freezing rain
          unrestrained
          in a sky re-grouping
          flaired forceful with the cold

Ice coated, leaf-less trees that bend
          like old men over their canes
Trees from an underworld,  
          frigid
          brutally hobbled by their rich, new coating

Maple trees, 
          heavy
          that seem to weep with worry
Glaze baked into branches that gleam
          in sober sunlight
          like a church lit by candles

Ice that flickers with sorrow and beauty
           a crystal knave
           inviting awe and repulsion
           for sheeted frost that veils the landscape

Refracted light, 
          glistening
          to fill the cramped chill of winter
Still life stiffened that crackles and hisses 
          when the wind blows

An icy, lush world that loiters in our minds, 
          stealthily
          to shimmer in our slumber






Poem composed: December 17, 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/9/2025 1:03:00 AM
Excellent imagery. Powerful oscillations. Loved the last 3 lines. ThkU for offering x.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/9/2025 6:52:00 PM
Most appreciative of your kind comments and (of course) for reading my entry. I was surprised and delighted that a fifth place positioning did not deter thoughtful poets from reading the poem. Thanks again.
Date: 6/8/2025 6:19:00 AM
Brian, hearty congratulations on your contest win with this nicely penned poem.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/8/2025 8:52:00 AM
Greetings Sotto Poet I appreciate your stop by and supportive note. Enjoy June and the summer roll out.
Date: 6/8/2025 5:54:00 AM
Very nice! Saving as a fave! Want to read again. Lovely alliteration!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/8/2025 8:49:00 AM
Thanks very much for your thoughtful message Kim. I hope all is well with you.
Date: 7/23/2023 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations also on this beauty of a poem! It's an honor to share the PS home page with you, Brian:-)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/23/2023 2:12:00 PM
Thanks very much, Edward. You are a gentleman + poet of the highest order. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 1/28/2022 7:06:00 AM
Really beautiful, Brian. Your images and word-choices are stunning! BW ~ Mala
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/28/2022 8:06:00 AM
Greetings Mala. Thank you for your gracious comment on my work. Hope that you are well. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 1/28/2022 12:01:00 AM
Vivid images. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/28/2022 6:00:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj, for your supportive note on my poem. Be well. Brian
Date: 12/27/2021 1:14:00 PM
Beautifully descriptive Brian. Your words ooze atmosphere. I can almost see the CO2 as I breathe out. Nature comes alive in every single one of your lines. Congratulations in Brian's contest. Cheers - Gary
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/27/2021 7:10:00 PM
Thanks very much Gary. Your visits + comments on my postings are much appreciated. Best of the season. Brian
Date: 12/15/2020 4:15:00 PM
Ice storms are magically beautiful and destructive at the same time. I enjoyed your description.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/16/2020 1:37:00 PM
Thank you Belden. I appreciate your positive response. Thoughtful of you to leave a message. Best wishes, Brian
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