After the Rain

sleep’s ferocious rain - morning brings sweet melody’s spirited songbirds 3/23/2022

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/29/2022 5:06:00 AM

I see you have observed the habits of birds and they have come back to entertain us for the spring and summer. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visit with congrats. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2022 5:42:00 AM

Thank you, Sara! :)

Silent One

Date: 3/23/2022 12:22:00 PM

aww this is lovely... love the imagery.. you are a master of this form..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2022 1:05:00 PM

Thanks so much! I knew the storm was leaving when I heard the birds singing. I appreciate you, Silent!

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/23/2022 12:21:00 PM

Kim loved your poem. There is nothing better than the smell of spring rain and hearing the birds sing. Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2022 1:06:00 PM

Yes, thank you for adding to the thought! Blessings